Voted For: (X)eed

Man...........please......RhymnSicC.. what was that...
Be real with yourself. 1. Your a white kid pretending to be black on the net. 2. Some of those lines didnt even rhyme. 3. Dont diss someone for being 14 when your probably 12. Truths hard aint it. I suggest you re-register a new name, start again and dont be so fucking gay when you come back.

Xeed, you got the right idea. Still need some elevation on writing proper set-up lines that lead to punches. And concepts aswell, think of 1 major diss per bar and word a set up line that will attack that weak point in a clever way. If you start to practice text battling like that youll be able to win some better battles.

The vote goes to (X)eed. Easily.

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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^aiight..... thnx NOs...... uppin this...

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Voted For: (X)eed

I See U Only Fourteen, So Dat Mean U Bout In Da 8th Grade.
U Be At School With A Hundred Machanical Pencils But No Lead.
um....and you are tryin to say what??
U Think Yo Lines Are Good, 2 Me Dey Aint Nothin But Shit.
Dey Stank So U Need 2 Throw Em In Da Toilet.
nice.................NOT
Ya Battle'n Da Best Nigga, So U Bout 2 Be Dead.
Me Battle'n U Is Like Fight'n A Nigga Withought A Arm Nor A Leg.
woah woah woah...didn't you already use somethin like this in anotha battle?? I think so....haha
When I Finish Wit U, U Gone Be At Da Bottom Of Da Map.
No Way 2 Move, Imma Leave Yo Ass Handicap.
oooooo that was a nice finisher

breakdown-this verse was garbage like most of your other verses....i tried to tell you what to do in all these others battles you is gettin herbed in but you don't wanna take a nigga advice...how ol are you cuz you rhyme like my lil sister...this verse really made me think about if i should rap or not...that was how garbage it was...not tryin to hate but you need to elevate majorly and then come back...




claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes
"no ones iller" gives bizzare a new definition to die
ok
the kid wuz dropped at birth, and it wuz a "sick" site to see
who said you wuz ill?? bitch you believe in Christianity
haha
Like Darth Vader said "son i am your father!"
The childs droppin......... shit now much faster
haha
Lyricaly he wack,but he snaps back to act tuff to try and flip
The childs life wuz a fake and he defiines the word "SKIT"
Sick to none, like tooth decay on Gums, aint sick, you damaged, your mama smoked too many blunts
haha...


Breakdown-verse wasn't like a OOOOOOOOO but it was difinetly enuff to beat this herb...um.. the way you put them last 2 bars was kinda confusin so you might don't wanna do dat no mo...overal it was a mediocre verse

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Voted For: (X)eed

i think u both really need to up ur game. . . (x) eed u lost me in the middle . . . i'm hoping that it was just over my head and not under my feet like garbage. . . rhymnsicC---"claims he sick but rhymes only single syllable rhymes"-- (x)eed kinda said it all there for rhymnsicC-- flow and structure tyerrible-- punchlines weak-- and i'm not trying to hate i usually find one positive note on each flow i just could notice one on urs thats y i had to vote for (x) eed-- cause you can't win boxing matches just cause you throw punches they gotta hit-- (x)eed just did better

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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ aiight uppin this....... 1 more vote to K.O. THIS SILLY HERB.... AHHAAHHA cmon..... up up up up up up

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