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07-14-05, 06:09 PM | #16 | |||||||
the medicine man
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dope shit.....nice vocab, feeling ya flow
love the title u painted a nice picture |
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07-16-05, 05:06 AM | #17 | |||
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
ok thanks ima RTF for all of you lot
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08-06-05, 07:45 AM | #18 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 3B5E 91B9
Nice piece right here, lemme break it down
The concept was good and even though it has been written about thousand times, you still managed to make it your own in a way. The emotion was the strongest aspect without a doubt, you spoke on some real shit that many can relate too. The imagery was there, might be worded differently here and there but overall it was solid. The flow was excellent, kept it consistent throughout the entire piece. The vocab was on point: not too basic and not too complex either you know. Keep it up fam...
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08-12-05, 02:44 AM | #19 | |||
WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
cool thanx DQ.....
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