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Old 07-13-05, 08:39 PM   #1
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wow... in realness dat was wank mate

& i hope leady got da receipt 4 hiz vocalz, cuz he needs dem ''returned''
need a little style in voice, dissin RAW Wuz ur choice....
ur [rap] shitz ''pushed-in'' lyke a gay-asshole when its 'Moist''

i mean come on now kid.... first line is stupid and makes no sense cos ur voice is ur voice its a natural feature dat cant be taken away from u nore can u cmhange it.. dats a wasted line allready... second line... well doesnt even attack me at all... n da 3rd well its badly worded, its forced and also played.. and it makes u sound like ur gay...

ur rhyme scheme was basic as fuck, ur rhymes were simple and ur concepts played n badly worded.... really dis sucked... n funny ting is... your still duckin me in our msn freestyle dat u called me out on.. i added u on msn but u aint accepted yet... n i could beat ur entire audio roster on my own... and wats even funnier.... im makin more moves offline, dan ur entire crew will ever make online or offline



^^^ true that its like how would you know what a pushed in ass hole feel like.........u been diggin ya finger insomebody ass after they got fucked in the ass or u got ya assfucked only true way u can know dogg...........but bottem line WORK ON YA DAMN STRUCTURE. i can tell if im lookin at a rap verse or lookin at rip off of the matrix. You flow would be alot better if u had structure and and worded it better.Come up with better concepts than gay assholes.......*shudders* didnt wanna know how a pushed in asshole would feel like. anyways work on ya structure
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Old 07-13-05, 10:25 AM   #2
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thanx 4 da feedback, uppin diz
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Old 07-13-05, 02:54 PM   #3
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Look foe I don't know what yall beefing foe and you lucky you aint mention my name but thats my clique so I'm ready to ride out if R.A.W wants war with some mafucking Livin' Legendz well yall got it and that one kid on the other page is gay as hell!
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Old 07-13-05, 03:48 PM   #4
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Old 07-13-05, 05:57 PM   #5
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yo uppin diz.......
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Old 07-14-05, 07:16 AM   #6
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Boo!...

you didnt diss me!
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