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ffoorr votes

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

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for more votes that are reasonable

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

uuuuuppppiiiinnnn please RV
i can retun favors lets go

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you pay da cost tonite,git back
for you catch an attack by da blackfrostbite

Voted For: opt1k

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Flow-BlackfrostBite...had his lines short and shit...but sadly...his punches lacked

Punches-Well...neither of you had any hot lines.That optik/illusions line would have been dope if used correctly.But I think Black frost bite was too basic.....so I think opt1k had punches.

Personals-BlackFrost as his opt1k line is the only personal here.But overall...personals lacked here.ELevate here.

Multis-meh...opt1k had a couple i guess.Blackfrost had a one syllable rhyme scheme which is played out.

Originality-Neither were creative but Blackfrost spoke about guns and such which is very played out.

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Voted For: opt1k

bitch understand the clocks tickin im' more that u can handle./
rcok against me ya bitch ill have ur body and vocal cords dismantled./

vs..

NOTHING..

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WEAK BBATTLE, BUT SHO GETS THIS COS HIS VERSE ACTUALLY DISSED HIS OPPONENT.

BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE AND LEARN NEW CONCEPTS, BLACK YOU NEED TO FIX EVERYTHING UP.

NO HATE.

RTF.

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Voted For: opt1k

shadow gets this...his verse had more flow punches were more direct and decent even without personals in therre...ets were cool and his structure was waaaaaaaaaay better...one advice to both yo...quit usin slashes in ur verses..it kinna messes the apperance up..black...dawg ur verse was just off...ur opner fell off mayne...the first line was ok but u demolished it with ur 2nd line...work more on ur verses dude...try makin ur lines of the same length so ur verse could flow at least a lil...that would be headin a step foward trust me...u didnt stay stable neither in punches concepts mets and structure also flow...u need to work a lil more...try by droppin verses in the "diss the person above you" cypher that could help u a lil bit...

anyways shadow gets this hands down with my xplanation ^^ + he seems to have mo xperience in battle...from what i c...

holla

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