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Barz&Penstripes | 5 | 71.43% | |
Young Phrophecy | 2 | 28.57% | |
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08-10-05, 09:22 PM | #16 | |
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This was feedback posted for Barz&Penstripes
IP: 4B9C C0D3
I know i can't vote yet, but if I could, Barz&Pinstripes would get my vote for the win. He keeps his lines more organized, and his syllables are pretty consistent. I also must say though that despite his good hits and points, he is a still a little all over the place and unfocused. I give him the win, but not by much. I would give him a C-. Peace Back
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08-10-05, 10:35 PM | #17 | |
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IP: 6E70 5212
Voted For: Barz&Penstripes
Listen I destroy legends like crash dummies and drug addiction This prophecies young 100% bullshit unrealistic born of fiction After me u'll need oven mittens & robotic arms to grasp da mic Its Common to sense "the bitch in yoo" like Hermaphrodites In your Sig Hov is apparent within a blue backdrop embarassed Go fig ur flows soft like Qtip ends and Gaylord Fockers parents A gunblast to the head would help you better off the mental Get the lead out your ass you might write better off the pencil This is friendly fire a display of Cain and Abel in sentence Punch this pussy in the mouth leave'em tampons to spit with Clean his lips with, sulk, moan and bitch with, alone I pitch dis In reality get your chin check and broke like asian dishes 4/10 Introspective...dahhs and do's from idolizing fools/I awake to bake, quake, and demolish you/ recieve ha's and oooh's from fantizing spoofs/ from the lyrical Armageddon i cast upon this goof/You couldn't destroy anything if i gave you a wrecking ball/ and the weather is surely hot but ya rhymes are not at all/In time you'll realize everyone had tried and failed/ but you i make an example hanging you on a wall with nails/ Like before i said i shall come like a thief in the night/ Your finished! cuz your more played out the white boy's pickin up mic's(hahaha)/I pause time just second to think of the next line/thinkin to myself "Nigga i'ma kill em' wit this rhyme!"/Stupid wannabe Microphones are rappers...Cool?/ and ya fuckin lines are shittier than a sample of dog stool(dog shit)/I come wit more tracks than a CD see!/ and i rhyme harder than them niggaz on Smack DVD/ and the name barz&penstripes that's so confusing/and i flip more niggaz the fucking circus amusements// 3/10 v/Barz&Penstripes... for better punches, nothing special, both need to elevate, pz
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08-11-05, 08:37 PM | #18 |
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This was feedback posted for Barz&Penstripes
IP: 0825 899A
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-24-05, 08:56 PM | #19 |
HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
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IP: 1D2D 3134
Voted For: Barz&Penstripes
better verse, better structure, better wordplay, liked it more..
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