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Old 07-16-05, 03:29 PM   #16
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feed plz?....upping...
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Old 07-16-05, 05:00 PM   #17
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Old 07-17-05, 04:38 AM   #18
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Old 07-17-05, 10:52 AM   #19
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Old 07-17-05, 10:57 AM   #20
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unfuck witable nice rhyme enjoyed it but le me add a little something

Wear witty bandanas but like city planners revitalize
Towns never prioritize clowns their title not wise
They Deliver hate that deteriorate neighborhoods
Behavior would cause problems try labor good
When writing and fighting my own imagination
Slam-dunk walls with the damn funk and all fragmentations
And debris may delay my travel may as well stay unravel
This lyrical bomb I constructed from rhymes and stray gravel
Come true and correct with all due respect rap game
Try trap lame cats and tame gatts not to shoot after aimed
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Old 07-17-05, 11:18 AM   #21
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liked the topic of debt nd such made for some good reading, flow was decent, the vocab was exeptional aswell... had the flow been a little smoother it would have been a much better peice but ima give it 7.3 / 10 regardless..... return tha favor on the links in my sig
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Old 07-17-05, 02:25 PM   #22
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lol@madd ok sik 1 i will rtf
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Old 07-17-05, 03:09 PM   #23
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nice drop homie shit was ill!!stayed on topic very well keep em' comin homie!!!!!!!peace
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Old 07-18-05, 03:46 PM   #24
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Old 07-19-05, 09:17 AM   #25
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this was good man, flow was good, imagery was ok, emotion was there, nice drop overall, keep it up
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