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07-22-05, 03:38 PM
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uppin this shit homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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07-23-05, 07:43 AM
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uppin this........................................
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08-20-05, 05:43 PM
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this joint was ok. some verses were better than others. yall need to work on puttin more punches in ya verse or some multies or somethin so its not as bland ya feel me.
one mic's best bar I just cock back, fire, then release my grip Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit ^nice solid bar, i was feelin that one opt1k's best bar nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz ^this was ok pretty basik tho. ya need to work on ya flow Lyrical mage best bar I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes ^you ha dthe best vocab but your flow n structure were all over the place knaledg1 best bar Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon, I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken, ^ i liked this bar jsut cuz i aint heard Tekken in a while n it was a good bar too tho overall this coulda been alot stronger i give it a 6/10 but its was decent returnt he favor. Links in the sIG
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08-23-05, 03:27 AM
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^^ haha man WERD and to be honest man ive elevated alot hiomie real so peep all my OM's i used to be opt1k now im shodown i changed my name but yea THANKS..........
ayo UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-23-05, 09:33 AM
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yer man thanks for that feedback, appreciate it. uppin this...................
link:- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204846
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08-25-05, 12:39 PM
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uppin this shit...................................
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204195
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08-25-05, 04:41 PM
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Accept gifts and that help uplift my pride best take this
As true don’t let fakes twist you because stress just piss Me off, never blunder fake and silly try undertake responsibility got a committee report now in a shitty court need some agility ready to say yes to charges stay best in garages because i fix cars and mix bazaar drink |
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08-25-05, 05:37 PM
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okkkkkkkkkk, that didnt make any sense................
uppin this anywayz..........
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08-30-05, 02:32 PM
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uppin this........................................
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08-30-05, 03:20 PM
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this was gay... you had NOTHING Witty or even funny. For TOPICAL, you had NO imagry and ya didnt have a good rhyme scheme.... this was bad... no offence, call me out or what ever, but it was bad...
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08-30-05, 06:22 PM
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fair enough then, if you think that way, but if you wanna post here and make feedback, make it GUD. uppin this......
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08-31-05, 06:36 PM
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MAN TELL THAT HOMIE To shut the fuck up!?!?!?!?!?!
this OM was old this was when we started out!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nigga wanna see skillz battle me in a topical..................... set it up heres the rules bitch no crew votes no hate votes no favor votes 2 days drop.................1 day check in cuz i got work the topic punk bitches hatin on a niggas work!!!!!!!
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09-01-05, 06:24 PM
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yo, uppin this shit...................................
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09-03-05, 12:36 AM
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Above Originality
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where that bitch at MAN!!!!!
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