hahaha, i was drunk...............................

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Voted For: Drakel

open: Drakel....kinda simple but its better than paras.....P need to work more on ur delivery
close: Drake;.....nice wordplay and wit tha closer very good punch....P need to work on those deliveries......
personals: Drakel....again cuz he jsut had more personlas mention his name almost in everyline......P u had alo of selfglory......
metas: none...really there wasnt that many metas here........
punches: Drakel....u had the better punches more punches and just was connectin harder best one was wit tha pic.....lol.....P need to work on deliver to those punches......
wordplay: Drakel.....had more wordplay wit it and had a good one at the closer.....lol......and really a nice job......P.......none really worked but keep tryin......


win: drakel just an over all better verse more punches more wordplay and really this was an aight battle......but drakel gets vote.......was way better......P....though u got a lil potential keep workin on it though......

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198196
RTF^^ on this battle........OVGR

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Voted For: parasite

aight this bitch parasite wants to battle, thats a joke
fuck rapping is suppose to make money....para is broke
um...
but seriously, talk about fucked, parasites got it down
shit, say your name, and even your baby fuckin frowns
ehh
killing this clown, fucking camping only time you in the big tent
parasite dropping hard? fuck, he doesn't even leave a dent
um..ehh
merkin foolz? hah, this bitch only wishes he had skill, bitch
cause last time parasite came ill.....he was feeling a lil sick
ok...but hella playedd
bitch knows he's whack, hiding his real amount of fights
cause like killin 2 urls, im easily taking down pair-of-sites
ok


BREAKDOWN-VERSE WASN'T GOOD AT ALL...IT LACKED ALL THINGS THAT ARE NEEDED TO WIN A BATTLE: PUNCHES, PERSONALS AND A LIL COMPLEXITY WIT WORDPLAY AND THINGS LIKE TAT...YOU HAD A LIL WORDPLAY IN YOUR LAST LINE BUT IT WAS SET UP LIKE GARBAGE...BUT STILL JUST KEEP DOIN YOU AND ELEVATE




if u had as much skill as u got posts, u still wouldt be "tight"
Im "nice" u dont got "ice" cuz u aint neva "shine"
OK
even tho you dotn got ice you steel is nt hot
cuz you filll of shit like a johnny on the spot
UM...OK
your aint hot, your cold like snow, but u dont have skill
drakel will get killed faster den u can say bill
UMM..OK
like a drill im drilling ya, like a killer im killing ya
and like broken coneections to sensors , im not feelin ya
HAHA.OK
i shine like my diamonds on my platinum chain
u couldnt win this beef if u was 50 cent vs the game
NAW
cuz you are lame, and like big mac your jsut wack
so dont go reverse, just go back
UMM...NAW
ur dick ridah red bull is gonna be your only vote in this battle
when u was a preschooler all u did was tattle tattle
HAHA...WHAT DA HELL
you accepted bthat was a mistake cuz you suck dick
trick ill leave like a tree after a storm, staring at your broken stick
HAHA...OK


BREAKDOWN-VERSE WASN'T GREAT BUT IT WWAS ENUF...YOU GOTTA GET BETTA PUNCHES CUZ THE ONES YOU WREE THROWIN WEREN'T REALLY HITTIN HARD...AND YOU COULD HAVE TRIED TO PLAY OFF HIS NAME OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT YA KNOW...AIGHT PIMPIN

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

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Voted For: Drakel

LMAO

Fuckin Newb-basher

CAW CAW!!!!!!!!!

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he called me out, lol, nah, it wasn't CAW CAW SSSS.......just beer,

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Voted For: Drakel

drakel was better so he got my vote. both were a lil weak but dakel had better punches man parasite all u talked about was dimonds and being icey i would think guci mane wrote your verse. work on punches and personals towards drakel
aight

return the favor honestly here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200978

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