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07-24-05, 02:44 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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07-25-05, 03:41 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: B5E3 845B
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08-07-05, 04:11 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 000D 1884
since Christian Soldiers is gettin some more feed, uppin this again
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08-07-05, 04:12 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 000D 1884
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08-09-05, 12:54 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
man dope piece, nice flow because of outstanding structure....good emotion nice imagery.....good use of vocabulary...up on multis yo......keep postin and doin ya thing 8.5/10 rtf on my sig links
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08-09-05, 11:36 PM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 4686 AB07
thanks man, favor will be returned, uppin this...................
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2356638
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08-12-05, 12:11 AM
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damn man, very emotional you have a good emotion in your writing, the stucture is good flow is good, but damn that emotion, nuce imagerym good choice of words vocab is decent not gonna say it could be ipped cuz really im reall feelin this one man. keep doin ya thing ya know this was very good man, i'd like to see some more some time.
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08-12-05, 12:15 AM
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 01CB 94A0
thanks man, if you want more check out Christian Soldiers, uppin this..............
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204091
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