Voted For: Drakel

Drakel... haha ya shit was funny man.... good personals, good hard punches. ya opener was just ok... lacked in a hard punch... good concept but just lacking a little bit. now your closer on the other hand was straight hotness.... excellent closer, funny as hell, hard punch... very good verse here

ya best bar:
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?

Chalk Clorox... first of all your structure could use some help, if your structure is bad it ruins the flow to your verse. second of all, there was really no personals in your verse, it could of been used for anyone. the only personal in there was the 5000 posts. ya opener wasnt very good, you even dissed yourself in it.....?????? your closer was pretty good... the setup line could of been better. some of your lines were stretch compared to the other line in that bar

ya best bar:
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse

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lmlo at getting tips from a 2-7 dude.....saying that bar doesn't rhyme, haha

oh well, good lookin.....http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/5/bump.gif

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Voted For: Drakel

Aii

Chalk
Aii MAn Your drop was BasicallY Waht I Expected a Diss at The Post count and A ryme with the word bitch and so On man You drop very Predictable and I think that That Is not hwo you should do it and you Had no punchez jus insults that Sound like you were fussin or somethin man BasicallY you didnt supply what I was lookin for in This battle so I couldnt give you my vote man srry

Drak
You know that we not the coolest peeps but if you wouldve used this verse on me then you wouldve won lol j/k ....but yeah man You really did good in this verse You dropped decent punchez good wordplay and then you had some personals so that really kicked off your verse and basically you toke this battle to the best of your ability and owned it jus like you shouldve ...I wouldve kicked yo ass if you wouldve lost this battle lol Im jus playin man anyway You dropped great Keep it up man You Talented

my v/ Drak

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Voted For: Drakel

chalk:
ill admitt it i cant battle worth shit,
5000 posts and you still havnt elevated bitch,
what do posts gotta do with elevatin? not a good punch/opening
but fuck it, your about to get raped,
cause i dont see your punches stickin like invisable tape,
if his punches are invisible tape, then they DO stick
ill kill this dude,
random line, don't add this if u're over the 10 line limit
leave your body worse than what your life is like,,
your winning chances like,
a dude in karate actually winning a fight,
like rhymes with like, but not very original, and karate people can win fights
put your verse in the mirror so you can reflect your loss,
your verse was writtin yesterday im bustin off top,
first decent punch, at least it makes sense
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
another good punch, good closing

overall- most of your punches didn't make sense, you got more than 10 lines, extra lines hurt ya flow


drakel:
match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
good punch/wordplay/personal
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
doesn't hit too hard, but ok
even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me
cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z
nothin special, ok tho
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
oooooo diss, chalk wears bras
whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus
so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish
good closing, but chalk's was better

overall- better punches, good flow, makes sense, wordplay's ok, much better verse

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