your a herb ass faggot i got this battle no offense to jack so stop dickriding the vet you fucking faggot

I'm not a vet, and when you get to be good, you'll realise, besides what the polls say, that I came better then you in this battle.

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

LOl
B4Real

Explanation

Narc
In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table
How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable
......Aii....
Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada*
Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager
....first line was good second line wasnt all that....
I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It**
The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked***
....Good....

Overall Man You Had a good verse nice wordplay Good personal and Decent flow I really didnt see any bad things about ya verse except ya Structure but Im pretty sure the system did it Bcuz i bet it wasnt like that when you typed it correct? Yeah it do me like that to lol
yeah but I think that you get my vote in this battle basically you came harder and better than jack in the most important areas

Jack
...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame
Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name
....aii...
So you better be carefull son, watch your back
N' fuck your member title, cuz...
In general... your just wack
......? No that was weak
And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second
He'll be gun-running
...without transporting weapons
...... Def was weak ....

Aii Man Overall your verse was kinda weak no serious wordplay and no good punchez and your structure threw the flow off and everything man so basically you jus didnt do all that good to me so i cant give you my vote in this battle man srry

no hate

RTF in any battle link in my sig HONESTLY

Structure, and flow, have nothing to do with a text battle, you stupid fucking herb, you all suck, honestly

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If your reading Someones verse then Your carrying a flow you dumbass get it correct and when your structure is fucked up then people have to stop jus to see if it went with the next line or the onbe before that I know how to vote STFU b4 I merk yo wack ass talkin all that shit .........You mad bcuz your ass gettin merked lol

Haven't I already herbed you stanza? yes I have. Now go to RB, RM, BBoys, and ask if flor matters in a text battle. Ok?

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Voted For: Jack The Ripper

In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table
How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable
damn nice opener 8/10
Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada*
Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager
not really good 4/10
I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It**
The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked***
ok closer 5/10

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...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame
Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name
aight good opener 5/10
So you better be carefull son, watch your back
N' fuck your member title, cuz...
In general... your just wack
.....lol..... nice personal there 10/10
And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second
He'll be gun-running
...without transporting weapons
aight closer 5/10

it was tight battle and a close one very good job from the both of u but im goin wit JTR he jus had that ill punchline there dont get me wrong narc u had it good there too......but really u had to pack more punch to it make it funny u kno......but good job to the both of yall but my v/ goes to Jack The Ripper
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RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES....OR VOTE GETS REMOVED.............

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

nice battle....

Jack-ripper- wasn't a bad verse...it just didn't really catch me with any of your punches or personals...this would have herbed a newbie but it wasn't enuff for narc




Narc- verse was nice...punches were ok...but nothing i had to double take on...didn't really see that much complexity from the both of you so that category is disqualified....and your lines are stretched so got damn long...i started to measure my dick....haha... naw but nice battle

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Who made my Sig- Shief BITCH!

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1-1.......

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Voted For: NaRc-UzI

...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame
Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name
^^meh...decent....a lil weak for an opener..but ight..
So you better be carefull son, watch your back
N' fuck your member title, cuz...
In general... your just wack
^^Nice personal.......but a better set up woulda been better
And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second
He'll be gun-running
...without transporting weapons
^^This was your worse line in this battle man

You really lacked that one "OOH" punch here.You had a lot of decent punches(aside from the last one).I ain't feelin ya basic/50 cent type rhyme scheme neither.Had some good personals.Next time...try to change those fillers into set-ups for the punch...it would really help the punch.

In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table
How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable
^^Flow nicely....good metaphors too
Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada*
Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager
^^^Nice personal in set-up....and nice meta again
I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It**
The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked
^^^Nice meta and personal

I'm really diggin your rhyme scheme here man.(Don't worry...I ain't gonna bite it)Every line had a metaphor of some such.And 2/3 of your bars had a personal.You got skill homie.Keep it up.

Vote-Narc-Uzi

right...... 2-1, wow...............................

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