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Old 07-28-05, 10:26 AM   #1
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hey yo man...dis joint was on point....flow and vocab..everything was godd....keep doing ur thing nigga...9/10
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Old 07-28-05, 10:27 AM   #2
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hahaha.........ayo man PM me homie on REALITY CHECK!!!!!!!!!!ill hook u up!!!!!!!!!!!!!it aint no hassle as WAR man so holla at me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-28-05, 02:01 PM   #3
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nice stuff man I want to hear hte audio bad now lol..but the last verse was a lil better then all of the otehr ones try to fix that..other than that a great read keep writing man!
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Old 08-02-05, 05:49 AM   #4
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ayo unrestricted put ur name in ur sig wit our crew name
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Old 08-02-05, 09:52 PM   #5
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Decent peace fam,

first verse was ok, kinda an intro and gettin the flow set, had basic rhyming but it flowed well, second verse is where you turned it up, vocab was batter and flowed better too imo...good ish fam.

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Old 08-02-05, 09:54 PM   #6
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ayo man for realz i appreciate that man real cuz too many fags hatin now and days real hahaha so did u check in on our battle yet for topicals?!
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Old 08-02-05, 09:56 PM   #7
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I think so, ima write my verse tommorow anyway
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Old 08-02-05, 09:57 PM   #8
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yea ima write mine now mayne.......but whats the topic again?!
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Old 08-02-05, 10:00 PM   #9
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Afraid of the dark.

Im goin bed now, its 3am here.

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Old 08-02-05, 10:01 PM   #10
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Dawg that shit waz nice nice job
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Old 08-02-05, 10:04 PM   #11
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ayo child mayne thanks ayo i understand ya dont got a crew?!hit up wit us REALITY CHECK HOMIE DROP A TRYOUT AND ILL FASHO ANSWER BACK HOMIE REAL!!!!!!!!!thanks



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