upppin............................................

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You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
nice word-play meta....

You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
streched,

Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.

2ed line u've fliped it, i've spit something like that befor i said, i'll stab ya punches just to add insult to injury...
still decent flip...

some decent punches... nice verse...





this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
decent

avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car\
aight

if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
aww nice punch here good ending

close battle but pictureprefect just edge this out close battle nice punches good fight

Voted For: Mr. Lyricist

mr.lyricist break down!

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side
I like tha play on tha words...good punch,but it didnt have any multi's( )
but still connect'd nice...8/10

You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
Sorta weak...but tha punch was coo..I like'd it! 6/10

Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
I sorta got this punch but didnt...."Dish 2 swipes?"..was that like dick on a plate,cuz if it was then that was nice...SWipe means in chicago is dick!
7/10

PicturePerfect his ur breakdown..."an I need more creativity?Hah!"

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
structure was nice,Very nice at that...but tha opener was played,not really a punch..5/10(cuz tha structure)

avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
Best punch thus far,personal an structure was on point..but tha punch was mundane at best...7/10

if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
Really? what where you tryin ta say?...I think you couldve throwin tha punch different,but still lacked creativity,and bad for a closer...4/10

Hey,I know im not tha best...but I judge battles on tha strong points of both contenders...not on multi's an wordplay..if tha punch connects it connects...so sayin that mr lyricist won cuz his connect'd an had good wordplay..while PP had lack'd in really throwin any punch that hit as hard as Mr's!

No hate just elevate,Str8 up an down!
Return vote an honest 1 please...

cold steel is a homo...... uppin....................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
vs
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.

and mr, i aint even like that line too much....
picture def took this for adding a personal in every bar
1st 2 bars nice hard hits
mr must be rusty cuz he fell off after 1 bar

bitches lickin bitches............................

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

Mr. Lyricist
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^self glor, no damaging punch 0/10^
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^Iight word play, semi diss 4/10^
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^sorta forced the rhyme, good wordplay 5/10^
OVERALL:Your verse was good structured, i was able to catch a good flow, only flawws were ur personals and punches i dont feel that they were hard enough.....and you had some self glor, talking about urself....save that for the cyphers

PicturePerfect2

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^Good punch and set up for the diss 6/10^
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^Once again good set up for the punch, hit hard 7/10^
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^pretty decent closer, 5/10^
OVERALL:u stayed consistant with your punches....they were effective to ur opponent....ur flow was off but u made up wit ur outstanding punches......you take this for better punches..

v/pictureperfect2

RTF on my new text battle.....thanks man

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