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Old 07-31-05, 10:37 PM   #16
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everyone said everything already, I'm feelin' LadyFiya's review so re-read hers lmao...
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Old 08-01-05, 12:35 AM   #17
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the chorus/bridge - I thought it was strait.. flowed well.. good job


First verse - i thought this was a decent verse.. dunno about the rhyme scheme you were using.. but i thought it was decent also..

Second verse - I liked this verse better.. scheme was better.. flow was more enjoyable.. pretty good shit here... gj

Third verse - the flow was different.. i liked it.. thought the vocab was pretty damn thorough in this verse.. good shit there.. overall i thought it was pretty hot..

overall i liked the track.. keep droppin man..
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Old 08-03-05, 12:01 AM   #18
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i like the beat, i was hopin for this new one to be a nice slow beat to chill too, the lyrics i didnt really get time to memories cuz i just heard it but i will soon but other then that its pretty good, when you finish your verse n hook to our collab get at me im fuckin back now, alright, i'll leave better feed later, 1
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Old 08-03-05, 12:18 AM   #19
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dude this track is ill man, ur voice makes it sound so ill man, the beat is cool too the hook was ill...basically this track was hella sick!! keep it up man
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