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one mic | 1 | 16.67% | |
~B~ | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-29-05, 11:51 PM | #16 | |
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IP: E32A 2156
Voted For: ~B~
you joined several months after me, and you got double my posts but you still no challenge to me at all, this battle must be a hoax ^^wat was point of the 1st line and whack think you got skillz???, prove it by spittin rampant bars but you cant, so imma flip this hoe like the guy in her avatar ^^^OK personal.... im too hot for you, why did sixth sense send me to battle you?? imma switch dre's quote, "you know what (~B~), i dont like your attitude" ^^this was stupuid....and EMinem said this retard quit rap, go into the porn industry, and focus on sex* cuz people are only gonna respect you if they know that you're blessed ^^whack......that's all...str8 whack bitch, you nutin to me, all your writtens are weak you the "First Lady Of illness", what literally??? ^^same shit as before...whack as fuck for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease ^^SHut up Ight ....look...do you know wat a punch is?I only saw one legitamate punch and that was in the one with her avatar.The rest was bullshit.I'm sorry if I'm hurtin ya feelings..but I vote with str8 honesty.Go in tutorials and find out about wordplay and metas.You can't just say "Twitchy like parkinton desiase"....and expect us to go "OOOOOHHH". U aint 'james bond' you're more like 'pussy galore'* cuz 007 gets ho's but ur just about to get whored! ^^^pssh....a lil basic.... After I giv u another 'L', ur confidence will be stirred, unlike 007's martini, u gon be 'shaken & scared!' ^^OK...it's personals I guess..so they hit a lil u had 16 battles and only managed 2 win '6'** changed ur name 2 'one mic' but u still suck dick! ^^set up was nice..but punch sucked...but a nice personal ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is.......... .............................................an apology card from durex!*** ^^Lmao...worded nice...it was ight Called u out a million times b4 but u always ducked**** must be a virgin they way u were scared 2 get (lyrically) fucked! ^^bah...again...set up nice..but punch lacked one mic such a 'herb' that he belongs in a kitchen! u havta be transgendered cuz ur a cock and a chicken! ^^OK....set-up nice...the best line so far I'm above u, u cant touch this, ur a lyrical midget If i personify skill with a girl then u'd be a fridget! ^^OK..... Well....you...like the other guy....were too basic.You lacked wordplay along with him.My reason for givin you the vote...is because you had personals.They were weak personals....yes...but personals nevertheless.They actually hit unlike the other's guy's one which had no efecct Vote-B |
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07-30-05, 12:06 AM | #17 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
werd on this shit ma.. overall a nice battle for B you been elevating and ya battle'n skills have improved a ton... the punches for B were witty funny and creative... i liked how your lines werent stretched and you kept the word play going through out the whole thing.. nothing to really bitch bout for ya very nice job
one mic... you have a bright future you just need to up your game some your punches lacked alot of punch you had an alright rhyme scheme and alright wordplay but i just dont think you were expecting this much from B ... Good JOb B.... now do me a favor and hit up one of [font]'s battles for the rtf.. cuz i dont need a rtf ha .. but o yea Vote//B-Gurl for having a better verse overall
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07-30-05, 06:29 AM | #18 | |
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
ite then thanx for votin anywayz. oh yer i forgot it woz eminem hu sed dat thing lol. uppin anywayz.....
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07-30-05, 06:31 AM | #19 | |
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
ur spellings fucked up anywayz macreep i cudnt even understand wot u were sayin half the time lol
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07-30-05, 07:24 AM | #20 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
thanx macreep and turban, but turban how come it says u didnt vote and it wasnt feedback
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07-30-05, 10:33 AM | #21 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
uppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. ............
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07-30-05, 01:42 PM | #22 | |
R.A.W Reality Has Began!!
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: one mic
Flow - One mic, was structured better, u had pretty tight verses goin on Punches - ONE MIC, some were played by both cats, but i felt that one mic had more Personals - ONE MIC again, had alot more, and were alot better, ~B~'s were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion ~B~ you shouldn't have to explain your personals Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses but overall i think that one mic took this one...
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07-30-05, 01:49 PM | #23 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
lmao, ok, thanx 4 voting i guess......................
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07-30-05, 02:12 PM | #24 | |
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
lol, yo bizarre thanx for votin man appreciate it. uppin......
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07-30-05, 10:28 PM | #25 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
2 the toooooooooooooooopppppppppppppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!! !!!
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07-31-05, 01:00 AM | #26 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: A8CB 1C80
Voted For: ~B~
nothin vs. ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is.......... .............................................an apology card from durex!*** good concept: sayin he shouldn't of been born... decently creative. since B was the only one with a punch he wins it cuz of punches creativity and.......shit but yo if u gotta explain that much shit aint that good. that durex line was good cuz it was good and didn't need anything extra to explain it. pz
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07-31-05, 07:24 AM | #27 | |
One Mic
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IP: 38B5 0CC0
wtf, nothin, thats clearly a hate vote LOL
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07-31-05, 08:42 AM | #28 | |
Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: ~B~
Oppinions-Alright in my view.......this really went to B..........he/she had alot more hard hittin bars and more bars infact. She kept it consistant wasnt eh best bars ive seen but there were all average and a lil bit above average.Basicly one mic should of brought more content to the table and should of made it hard hitting. Flow-Both flows were nice and was easy to read Structure-both there structures sucked Metas-B took it with ease Punches-Be took it with ease Conetent-B had alot more content Damn did not feel like doing this but what the hell anyways winner is B in my Opinion Vote on my battle- Between me and (X)eed.......i only need one more vote dammit so come on bring it home for daddy
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07-31-05, 09:19 AM | #29 | |
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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IP: 042E 9E4C
hey well, thanx 4 votin u 2......and dollar, i cant vote on that battle cuz im crew wit xeed.
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07-31-05, 12:07 PM | #30 |
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IP: A181 D033
Voted For: ~B~
its kinda funny cos i'm voting in a battle between two of my former families.... this was a decent battle. i thought that B came harder than one mic in this one though. one mic lemme hit you wid some feedback on your rhyme: the first bar was real weak man and you should have at least made it rhyme cos we all know that posts and hoax don't rhyme mayn!!! "prove it by spitting rampant bars" = weak as hell opener for real. and you shoulda tried harder with that personal about her avy. after this point in your verse you fell off completely talkin some random shit like the line about leavin rap and goin into porn, no hate.....just elevate Right now B you had much better personals, you really did your research before you dropped your verse against him. so that allowed you to come harder at him with the james bond personals and things like that. the line about him being like a virgin scare to get fucked was hilarious for real i was feelin that, the setup line about one mic belongin in a kitchen was weak but i know you know that cos you came back especially hard with the punchline about him being a cock and a chicken (another funny line might i add) you had the most original and humourous verse so my vote has to go to B yo B hit up my battle against Abash cos i need to get that shit over and done with already http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198520 |
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