Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Flow - Tie, Both had jacked up structure hard to catch a good flow

Punches - Coldsteel had a few better punches, six sense had some 2 but coldsteels stood up more

Personals - Coldsteel, had some nice personals that caught my eye.....six sense had some played personals..no hate

Multies - Tie, becuz didnt see any multies from either...sry guys

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Flow - Tie, Both had jacked up structure hard to catch a good flow

Punches - Coldsteel had a few better punches, six sense had some 2 but coldsteels stood up more

Personals - Coldsteel, had some nice personals that caught my eye.....six sense had some played personals..no hate

Multies - Tie, becuz didnt see any multies from either...sry guys

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


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Voted For: Sixth Sense

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

coldSTEEL, u cant hurt me, the only bars u got are from Hershey’s
Cuz u have bitten rhymes..............
.............ur too fat, I say Thanksgiving and he goes for the turkey
^^set-up played as fuck and punch weak..2/10
Ur verses are boring like text wit laughin gas makes the voters go to sleep
That’s must be his technique, cuz the wins he got were......all very cheap
^^lyrics put you to sleep?..cheap?...1/10
Kid u need to relax, cuz those made-up stories aren’t goin to stack
Steel put ur face in the encyclopedia cuz really u need to face the facts
^^MEh...your best punch...so....4/10

Weak verse here.Structure was good.Flow was ight.Punches sucked ass.1st bar..set-up was played.I mean...you didn't think HErshey bar/rap bars was gonna be creative did you?and the punch sucked.MUsic put you to sleep...horrible concept..c;mon.That last line was your best and that wasn't even all that good.


Drop a line against me?..YOu gotta be a bit-dense.
Your rhymes are chump change,They only add up ta six cents.(Sixth sense.)
^^forced multi..punch coulda been better..but wordplay is wordplay...5/10
Okay.."you did swell.",but coldsteel?.."My lead~lethal!"
So accept leavin wit a"Big L"..Cuz thats gonna b tha only time you see dead~people.
^^Nice wordplay again..but drop the "~"......6/10
Why?..cuz your lackin and Im relentless Fo' real!
He changed accounts ,cuz The punches ur packin got voters losin tha sense's they feel!
^^flowed bad...and punch was weaker than the rest..3/10
Triple 6?...I guess you wanna spit fire like a demon!
Shouldve called you whirl pool....They way you like swallowin sea~men!
^^PLayed wordplay here..2/10
Ive won this battle..esp. with this last round!
Cuz its sorta like playin poker wit a parapeligic..I got this Hands down!
^^OK......4/10

More lines than sixth sense...so that gives you a clear adavntage here.Flow was a lil choppy at times and structure was lacking.But I liked the punches.What you had over sixth sense was you used wordplay.HAd some played ones though....like sea-men/semen.But overall...you verse had more to offer.

Vote-COldsteel
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256

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how many times did that dead people concept been used.....lol.....

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yea boi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

damn.......again damn--lol . . .
Personal: Coold Steel
Structure: understod cold steel short long, but kinda was feeling sense
Wordplay, flow . . . everything else: cold steel
I don't think i have to explain anything really i thought cold steel took this one hard hitting punches . . put together well . . . i would say whats my fav. line just can't pick one right now cause every other one was a diss. .. lol . . good luck and great job . . no hate... keep wiriting . . PEACE

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