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Reflekt 1 16.67%
Pressence 5 83.33%
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Old 08-03-05, 04:17 PM   #16
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From: Alosta City
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Voted For: Pressence

Reflekt

like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)
^playing off his name could've been done a lil better but still good though

u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*
^nice personal right here, well the second line anyway

im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack
^no punch, just self-glorifying

its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads
^hehe coo closer right here

Overall solid verse, good punches, some personal attacks, only the third bar kinda fell off. Flow was coo, vocab might be upped a little.


Pressence

talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'
^nicely played off his name in the opener

biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"
^lmao, funny shit

beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water
^great wordplay in this one formed into punches

dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'
^hehe lmao at the last line, got me laughing man

Very nice verse here, got me laughin few times, good creativity, punches kept hitting hard, vocab was on point as well as the flow, no bad comments here!
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Old 08-03-05, 04:56 PM   #17
Daubs
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From: Salford
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Voted For: Pressence

talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'

NICE NAMEPLAY, GOOD PUNCH.

biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"

PLAYED CONCEPT, BUT YOU FLIPPED IT NICELY, FUNNY PUNCH.

beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water

GOOD WORDPLAY, COMIC PUNCH AGAIN.

dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'

SORTA PLAYED, BUT STILL DECENT.

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like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)

PRETTY DECENT NAMEPLAY ALTHO KINDA BASIC

u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*

MEH, OK NAMEPLAY.

im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack

ATTEMPTED WORDPLAY, BUT AM NOT FEELIN IT.

its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads

ANYONE CAN MAKETHREADS SO THIS WAS BULL.

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EZ WIN FOR PRESSENCE, HE HAD BETTER EVERYTHING.

HIS PUNCHES HIT HARD AND ACTUALLY MADE ME LAUGH A LITTLE, THERFORE HE TAKES THIS EASY.

NO HATE.

RTF IN MY SIG PLEASE.
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