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08-11-05, 04:52 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
Pretty Nice Drop Overall...
Storyline Was Good... Structure, Emotion Was Real Nice, Imagery-Dope... Your Flow, On Point... One Thing About You I Never Used To Like... You Flow Just Bord Me... I Dunno, This Piece Held Me Though... So Oviously You've Been Improving, Real Nice Mayn... And You Do Have Multies... You Had Some Long Ones At The End... *Shrugs*, Maybe Just Use Internals Aswell... Nice Overall Though... Please Return The Favor On Me And Vango's New Drop... Called "Hallow Tips Pt. 2": http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ghlight=atticus Thanks Alot Mayn, Stay Up... .One. |
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08-11-05, 04:53 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 997D A94C
thanks a lot for the feedback...
uppinizzles
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