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.Merkage. | 5 | 100.00% | |
Law_Jr | 0 | 0% | |
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08-08-05, 01:51 PM | #16 | |
got u all confused n shit
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upage man.............thanx 4 da vote.......................
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08-08-05, 11:48 PM | #17 | |
got u all confused n shit
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08-09-05, 12:07 AM | #18 | |
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uppin.......................
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08-09-05, 06:17 PM | #19 | |
got u all confused n shit
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08-11-05, 09:09 PM | #20 | |
got u all confused n shit
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08-11-05, 09:24 PM | #21 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: .Merkage.
Structure-Both had bad structure, cant vote on this catergorie both up on structure and make ur lines end up at the same point, cant stress that enough. Vocab-Niether had appealing vocab, both should up on vocab as ur verse goes along...makes it more appealing to the eye.... Punches-.MERKAGE., had better punches...more fresh punches that hit harder, law ur punches were sorta played i wasnt feelin them....make sure ur punches actually hits ur opponnet Personals-Best personal has to be from merkage first 2 lines...sick...keep that up homey practically won u the battle....didnt see much from law....up on that homey do you want to win? Multis-Niether had appealing multis to my eye...multis helps the flow and makes it more appealing to read....both up on that....... Originality-.merkage. was more original and fresh...verse law i didnt think urs was so original had very basic rhyme scheme....keep it up and shit..... V/.MERKAGE. RTF SINCE I TOOK THE TIME TO ANALYZE YOURS OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED :THUMBUP: |
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08-11-05, 09:29 PM | #22 | |
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Voted For: .Merkage.
if u don't understand don't vote....: got to be stupd not to understand . . . u won pretty simple ... punches were harder hitting. . . personals was better. . . more structured verse. . . better flow . . well organized .. and easy to read : fav. line. . . look at ya "name" man da dummy underscores himself. . . well done keep writing
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08-12-05, 12:26 PM | #23 | |
got u all confused n shit
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uping................................2more........ ..............
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08-16-05, 04:10 AM | #24 | |
got u all confused n shit
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08-16-05, 11:36 PM | #25 |
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Voted For: .Merkage.
i guess it goes to merkage : flow was better harder hitting punches: best line :look at ya "name" man da dummy underscores himself Look "Jr." You anit tha "Law" but son ya ways are Trife... :great punch topoo bad it didn't rhyme. . . but the punches were there beside that bar everything else was straight and like i said i still found it entertaining... desent drop keep writing.. good luck to both
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08-17-05, 01:24 AM | #26 | |
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08-17-05, 03:48 PM | #27 | |
got u all confused n shit
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1 more family............................................ .
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08-19-05, 02:44 PM | #28 |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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This was feedback posted for .Merkage.
IP: ABAF E236
wow u both came so bad that this was close lol....
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08-19-05, 03:26 PM | #29 | |
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This was feedback posted for .Merkage.
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pollz............................................. .
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08-19-05, 10:19 PM | #30 | |
got u all confused n shit
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