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taz 4 44.44%
Mel Tingpoint 5 55.56%
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Old 08-11-05, 06:19 PM   #1
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uppin... L.I's feedback was good enough, how long do u gotta type just for your vote to adequate, damn
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Old 08-11-05, 09:02 PM   #2
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Voted For: taz

Mel cant peep my sh*t dont swear he has virgin eyes*
After my 10 lines this cats L column will be devirginized
^^not much a punch here....2/10
His personals are swarmed wit lies he dont know me
Wit guys he gets cozy sO wit girls he gets lonely
^^WITH girls he gets lonely?..make no sense..2/10
Im battelin a true newbie who the fuck you be?
He talkin bout guns but he dont have ballz ta shoot me
^^man...this was weak...3/10
He from rb now he rv tryna get the sites conjoined
Well this cat met his match, im his melting point
^^not much of a punch....2/10
Cant mess wit a dude like him cuz him being gay is likely
He standing on the corner fuckin dudes on the nightly
^^basic...gay jokes gotta be creative as it's likely been done before...4/10

Ok...your verse didn't have enough str8 punches.It was more of self glorifing.Some,like the 2nd bar,didn't make much sense...as you said..he gets lonely around girls?If you said angry it woulda made sense.But lonely?

I'll put it like this u never had it, so put away the gimmicks
taz elevating.......... nah! the sky's past your limit
^^hmm....Ok i guess....5/10
This text shit ain't for you, but I'ma still get down to biz yo
Punches will cause this faggot to subside................
.......................................... he'll prolly go to Quiznos
^^NO....2/10
Mel is past average and better than you, taz eluding the clues
Man you gotta dress to kill................. I guess text ain' suited for you
^^NO....basic rhyming here too...2/10
I'm abusive so true, calamities hurting this herb
U ain't a straight forward MC................ to win, I think your purpose is curved
^^zzzzzzzzz.....2/10
These irritating heads, I'ma kill these fleas, while your skill is seized
Beat the skin of ya bitch as....................
..................................taz still would'nt appeal to me
^^^not much of a punch...1/10

Man..aside from the 1st bar...there wasn't much in that verse I was feeling.I suggest some better wordplay and metas and such.I think you need to ease up on the dots.That only works if done correctly...which you didn't.


WEAK BATTLE HERE!!
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Old 08-11-05, 09:04 PM   #3
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yo that shit wuz fire son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-11-05, 09:06 PM   #4
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natural see what ur saying, shoulda took 1 more minute to relize that...........uppin fo more votes ya'll
 
Old 08-11-05, 09:29 PM   #5
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c'mon nigga............................................. ...
 
Old 08-11-05, 10:19 PM   #6
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uppin... natural killa is dumb as hell
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Old 08-19-05, 09:04 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by Mel Tingpoint
uppin... natural killa is dumb as hell



boy don't even try it...I'd merk yo ass to peices
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Old 08-12-05, 12:10 AM   #8
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uppin like crazy people dont sleep on me damn, cant a cat get some votes?
 
Old 08-12-05, 02:09 AM   #9
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one sided haha
Mel - ya structure was FUCKED
disses just werent there.. thats that
but like for real.. there was no flow
cuz ive never seen a structure that bad
even if you had wrote a dope verse
(wich you didnt) id vote against you
just for actually posting your verse
with a structure that bad.. overall - 4/10

Taz - decent structure.. had some flow
disses were pretty good too, nothin amazing
you actually came wut some personals
thats a good look, no doubt. overall - 6/10

WINNER - TAZ
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Old 08-12-05, 03:05 PM   #10
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^^much appreciated yo......uppin for more votes...holla
 
Old 08-13-05, 03:51 PM   #12
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should win.............................................
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Old 08-19-05, 03:16 PM   #13
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Old 08-19-05, 08:56 PM   #14
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Checking this Out what's good Mel I didnt know you where here.
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Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
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ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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Old 08-19-05, 08:56 PM   #15
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Yo I'm sorry abou that.........I'll get that Removed
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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