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08-11-05, 10:34 PM
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The Darkness
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IP: 2029 97B3
HaHa Man Fuck Off You Little Herb I Got Enough Beef To Start Ripping You Get Out My Thread Bitch
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08-11-05, 10:35 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 53C6 22B9
^^bitch....you whack as fuck...stop talking like you good..
Lame ass nigga...talkin about the system and monica luwinsky...then you claim it's not played...herb at his finest..... |
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08-11-05, 10:36 PM
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This is my first post!
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This was feedback posted for Moral
IP: 2029 97B3
Now Shut The Fuck Up You Bitch Ass Herb Fuck Off Get Out Of Here
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08-11-05, 10:37 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 53C6 22B9
^^wall street?...hmm...still don't know you...but you whack..
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08-11-05, 10:37 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Unlike You Bitch Ass Text Heads I Don't Play With Text I'm Audio So Soon As You Step Your Game Up To Audio Holla At Me Untill Then Keep Doing Your Little Text Shit You Ho
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08-11-05, 10:41 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 53C6 22B9
^^umm....hate to burst yo bubble homie....but this thread..is a text battle
and you been here since 03 and you whack like dat?...smh... |
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08-12-05, 01:58 AM
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IP: 8D90 9AAC
Voted For: Moral
Aight here we go... . FV---Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil<<<Weak opender and a punch that is below par and bad set up all around.. I would call you an: ass: but that we already know Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows:<<<congrats you just complemented him..(you said he could flow) Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar: Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw:<<,not bad not bad at all...... And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W: Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you<<<<<Whoa terrible.......cheap blow with a weak punch................. . . Moral----Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim<<<not bad just dont call him weak names... Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under<<<<very good punch and origional..... 6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb<<<<<not bad here good double meaning...nice punch all around For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose<<<<<made me laugh...good punch also Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski<<<<whoa not good.....the feeling was off in this one didnt like it at all.... . . OK Flow Verse, why did you only do 8 lines???.....in a battle may i suggest that you do the maximum amount....and oh yeah try to mix it up with metas and multies and keep the structure good.....and work on your punches ALOT... . . Moral---you need to elevate i sence that you were forcing your punches instead of letting them connect and flow the right way....most of your verse was good....but that last line was terrible...in my mind a newbie could have came up with that one.....but any way both of you dont force it let it flow......cause you are as good as your last battle...and nobody wants an L . . V/Moral |
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08-12-05, 01:59 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP: 03A1 5B9D
Voted For: Moral
Moral Record's 4-7 Your Win Percentage Is Less Then The Systems It's Proven Flow Verse Is Destined To Fall, You Infested Victim Not feeling this. Blah personal and punch. Your Elevation Aint Changing, It's Sort Of Like Your IP Number You Couldn't Put Me In Check If, My Feet You Put Nike's Under Bad wording, I can't see his IP. 6-10 Lines Why Waiste My Verse When I Don't Need A Word Your Resemblence Presence Strong Obssesions, A Weed Herb Eh...Ok punch. For Vote's Your Catching Range Checks, Verse Don't Got Flows Out Of A Scale 1 To 10 Your At It's Worse A -10 You Compose Not a real punch really. A statement. Don't Need 10 Line's, Cause I Didn't Lose You Don't Convince Me All I Know Is Your On Your Verse Sucks More Then Monica Lewenski Kinda played punch. I've seen a lot better from you man. Blah concepts and punches. flow verse Rhymes are preschool like children stories behind them is always moral This battle is for fun and games with you I am just going to toil No punch. I would call you an: ass: but that we already know Simple because of the fact when u spit only: shit flows: No originality here. Even if you were a: cingular: rapper u still couldn’t: raise a bar: Though you just been: murder: I still don’t consider you: raw: Blah set up, bad punch. And like the: alphabet: it will take 22 tries before you get a: W: Take: Common’s: advise and: Go: get off RV cause no one like you No punch. This verse had one punch attempt. I didn't like anything really. Structure was easy to read I guess. Overall, I've seen better battles, but I give this to Moral for real punches and harder hitting. Work on originality. v- Moral
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