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Batman 1 16.67%
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Old 08-13-05, 10:15 PM   #1
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1st of all...Unres. verse was butter...the only thing I didn't like was the set up on the 1st line...like u jus said that shit to rhyme the 2nd line...but u had good punches and nice wordplay...nice verse
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Old 08-13-05, 11:38 PM   #2
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Stuture was real bad, alot of played ryhems, you had some stuff that made me laugh, but overall it was kinda bad
 
Old 08-15-05, 12:42 PM   #3
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Old 08-15-05, 04:26 PM   #4
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Old 08-16-05, 03:38 PM   #5
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Old 08-16-05, 09:24 PM   #6
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Old 08-16-05, 10:34 PM   #7
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unrestricted got this...

his lines were much better, i liked the light it up punch...it was dope i was also feeling the ugly face lines, your lines w ere a little stretched but overall coo

batman seriously wtf was that you had a horrible rhyme scheme...the bounty on ya head line was bad...you need o elevate

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Old 08-17-05, 11:54 AM   #8
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Old 08-17-05, 08:28 PM   #9
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Old 08-17-05, 09:51 PM   #10
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Old 08-18-05, 10:40 AM   #11
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Old 08-18-05, 02:49 PM   #12
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Old 08-19-05, 02:13 PM   #13
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Old 08-19-05, 03:27 PM   #14
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Old 08-22-05, 11:42 PM   #15
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