Lyrics....
Aight your lyrics are very basic. First thing I checked was the face/place.. Veins/brains.. Rap/strap.. Use some multis now and then.. You tend to slur your words at times. I understand you, the accent isn’t an excuse. You just have to be more clear. Clarity is something you will have to take time and work on, I can see that easily.

Voice/Presence...
The way you jumped in your verse was just wrong, you came off like you were gonna rip it. You shoulda followed through. Your voice is outta place on this beat. Your presence is there but not.. When I say that I mean that you tryna let people know “this is you” but you not bringing the cockiness you start up with your lyrics.

Emotion/Delivery...
I don’t believe anything you say past the first 2 bars. Your emotion sounds artificial as though you tryna sound harsh on your verse just because the rest of the people did on their verses. You need your own shine to this that you didn’t bring correctly. And the way you delivered your verse shows that.


Flow...
Your flow is decent, you know how to keep up with this beat. But there are times you fall behind the beat gradually and then you try to catch up and end up slurring words at times.



Lyrics...
You stepped up your lyrics about 5 notches… Problem with it is that it sounds like you left your focus on the complexity of your words. That you might lose the common crowd. The farther you go on in your verse, however, you drop the super-dictionary bars.

Voice/Presence...
It sound like you have too many effects over your voice.. It’s like your voice is lifted off the track instead of blending in. Other than that, this was your “this is me” track.


Emotion/Delivery...
This is actually a track where I could be like damn, Acuity speaking from his mind on some real shit. You made your intentions known through your emotion. It wasn’t an aggressive “you gon’ hear me out’’ type thing, but it was a more of a “you think you know my ability, naw, here it is”. So, that’s what made me enjoy it.

Flow...
What’s shockin is your flow didn’t clash with the super-dictionary words. There’s a few places you couldn’t keep up with the previous bar. But overall the flow itself was pretty alright.



Lyrics...
Don’t just use big words to say you used big words in your rhymes.. They should have some reason in your rap. That’s why I hate this track. There’s no direction. You might as well say 2 words over and over again.

Voice/Presence...
Your clarity is better. Stop putting those effects over your voice.. They’re too heavy. It makes you sound weird at certain parts.

Emotion/Delivery...
Your emotion was similar to the previous track, but it got really boring. It’s bout time you switched it up. Sounds like you wrote this for any type of beat. Instead of tryna fit your rhymes custom to the beats in this track.

Flow...
Your flow was really off on this track. When I say that, I mean OFF… Seems like you didn’t know if you wanted to hit snares or not. And it’s hella annoying.



Lyrics...
Story-telling. Thank God, because you sound sooooooooo much better when you put a story to your tracks, than when you talk bout random shit. Your lyrics are pretty decent. I can tell you took some time to use the right words for this track.

Voice/Presence
This is not the type of beat I’d expect you to use. You pulled it off, when you showcased the bass in your voice for this ‘feather-light’ beat.

Emotion/Delivery...
The emotion was perfect for the beat. You didn’t need to show no screaming or yelling the effects pulled their own weight. The fact that you took the relaxed but alert approach on this beat made you come off as someone who knows what he’s talking bout. This is prolly my favorite by you.

Flow...
Flow was another thing that was pretty decent. There’s no hard snares in this but you followed the beat well. You sound more in contact with the beat on this song than any other song I’ve peeped.



I won’t critique a freestyle. But what’s funny is this sounds nothing like a freestyle at the beginning, but after the first 4 bars your flow is WAY off.


I’d suggest you write a track about something most important to you and make a story outta it. I know it sounds hard. I know you have the ability to tell a story. And your better lyrics come out that way. You gotta start picking beats that match your style. Not just because they sound good. You need beats that you can make your lyrics and flow custom to. Stray away from doing collabs until you feel comfortable with your style.

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