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08-21-05, 02:38 PM
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nice Mizz......Emotion was deep an ya imagery was top notch too, Wasnt feelin the length of your peice, maybe could of stretched it for 6-10 lines more...cause while it was creative an a good read, I felt some parts of your verses you could of worked on a little more an gone into a little more detail, dunno if you understand? but ah well, 8.5/10.....real nice drop Mizz...
Now tell me somthin, when you can drop like this, Why concentrate your talents on some loved out bullshit thats corny as the movie dances with wolves?.....
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08-21-05, 02:40 PM
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**the council**
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IP: 6B3C 562F
^^^thanx for the feed......but to answer your last question.....when have i EVER done that.......lol
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08-21-05, 02:42 PM
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LOL
That shit with tony green, it was corny Mizz an you know it...I hated it, Reminded me of that kelly rowland an nelly track dilemma for some reazon.
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08-21-05, 02:43 PM
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IP: 6B3C 562F
^^^nah i think it was good actually.....creative y'know
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08-21-05, 02:50 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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Nope, i dont know lol...
dont be offended Mizz lol, Loved up shit is not my style, I'm sure other corny mo'fuckers will appreciate your writing in that topic 
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08-21-05, 02:52 PM
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**the council**
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IP: 6B3C 562F
^^^lol nah i ain't offended everyone's got an opinion lol
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08-21-05, 02:55 PM
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yo this is mad nice like the approach to this one really mad nice keep it up MF rep TC....yeah..but the piece is good had it all jus work a lil more on the emotion side i think u can do a lil bit betta ya kno but everythin else is doin goo diahgt jus keep droppin aight....1.....
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08-21-05, 02:56 PM
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IP: 6B3C 562F
^^^thanx for the feed..........
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08-23-05, 01:45 PM
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IP: 5E3D 6FD7
uppin..........
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08-23-05, 01:48 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Damn this was hot I aint know you could this deep but you always surprise my the image was so good in this it felt like I was witnessing all this with my own 2 eyes but this was fire 9.5/10 keep it up!
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08-24-05, 08:02 AM
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This was great. The opening really showed how much of a sweet person you are. It mentioned some personal events in your life which is always good. The emotion was great, the wording and flow was even good.(surprised since most om's lack in this area). The part about your dad was sad. Hope you dealing with that okay. The line about why can't some things be everlasting. I wonder that too. I really hope you turn audio soon. Cause I honestly believe you can do it. Good job.
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08-24-05, 08:06 AM
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**the council**
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^^^thanx for the feed.........
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