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08-18-05, 12:46 AM
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This was feedback posted for Acumen
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checcccccking polls.. my nigglez..................
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08-18-05, 02:52 AM
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Coming to Kill you All
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Voted For: Acumen
i'ma start by saying i'll shove my dick down your throat till it hits your tonsils.. and your rhymes couldnt rock it.. if they were attached to missile launchers.. ^^Played concept with the couldn't rock it blah blah blah...3/10 jumped on my cock in my thread thinking he posed a threat.. damn ho. skep.. i know your working for the sewers.. cause your always in man holes.. ^^hmm...OK....5/10 you cant handle it.. my rhymes sick.. im a cannibal so just die bitch.. and im finna eat this clown.. cause you know that im hannibal's sidekick.. ^^not much of a punch...1/10 will skep get a W or an L... well i think we can all guess the letter... cause skep couldnt bee hood.. with a new orleans hornets sweater... ^^Ok wordplay.....5/10 OK..decent verse.Flow and structure was good throughout the whole thing.I thought the 2nd was 4th bars were your best.But you seem to have a generic way of dissing.Like you couldn't be this if you blah-blah-blah.You know.But keep goin..a style'll come to you eventually. Twist-His-Neck Go Ahead Say You Gon’ Lift-A-Tech, Eaze-Ya-Vibe….. Strip-Ya-Vest And Rip-Ya-Chest Apart Eat Ya Heart And Speak-Ya-Pride!!!// ^^good multis as it flowed..but where's the punch?...2/10 This Is The Option, I'll Call You 'Stripper' Cuz Its 'Ass That Ya Droppin' Leavin AC 'Diss Owned' (disowned) Similar To 'Kids Up For Adoption'!!// ^^DOPE.....8/10 Grab-The-8-N Bend You Back-To-Waist-N Leave Ya Face Wit Lacerations …..Laughs-Is-Raisin Cuz U A Dick Wit A Dick In Mouth Similar To A Fags-Engagement!!//(Think!!!) ^^c;mon man....2/10 When I Spit "Testages-Ya-Flip-Ya-Dome" And Like Funerals My "Message-Will-Send-Ya-Home" Ill Leave You "Restin-Wit-Ribs-Of-Chrome" Homie If U Wanna Stay Testin Even "Ya-Kids-Get-Owned"!!// ^^weak....2/10 OK..bad verse.Here's what.I think the only good bar was the 2nd one here.It was probably the best in the battle.But the rest of your punchlines lacked.Get more consistant.Comprise of a verse of punches like the one you had in the 2nd bar..and you'll be on your way.Don't be so caught up in multis.Punches are more important.N ur structure.fix it up.DOn't leave a space within every bar,stop with the (") by every multi,n don't have this(//) at the end of your bars . Vote-Acumen VOTE BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204478 |
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08-18-05, 08:57 AM
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Ok thnx for da Votes.
Uppin For More..........
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08-18-05, 05:22 PM
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The.Champ.Is.Here
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IP:
appreciate the honest votes...uppin for more......
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08-19-05, 10:40 AM
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IP:
uppin 1
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08-19-05, 08:42 PM
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The.Champ.Is.Here
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uppin for this ish................................
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08-19-05, 09:04 PM
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IP:
Voted For: Acumen
acumen: you had aiight structure...a lil bit stretched but shit was all even...the flow was aiight...the punches was pretty good i give it a 7/10 ...flow was aiight.......the personals...blah didnt really see any...overall 7/10 skep: skep had better punches i give i 8/10 shit was fiya...structure wasnt good mayn i give it 6/10.....your flow was good...you killed him in the multi's though still....overall i give it 7.5/10 skep took this due to better punches flow and mutlis
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08-19-05, 09:06 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP:
my bad i meant acumen got this barely....typo .....
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08-20-05, 03:02 PM
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The.Champ.Is.Here
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IP:
thanks for the vote....uppin for more.............
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08-21-05, 08:18 PM
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IP:
Yo its 2-1
He Accidently Voted for You so its 2-1 iight
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08-22-05, 09:45 AM
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wait a sec how could he say my verse was a 7.5/10 and urs was a 7/10 and he even gave me better comments and then he says he votes for u??? thats fucked up
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08-23-05, 11:46 AM
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The.Champ.Is.Here
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ya so its not 2-1 its 3-0 and uppin for more votes....
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08-23-05, 12:12 PM
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Voted For: Acumen
close here...but acumen takes this for a more consistent verse...his structure was better and his verse kept on flowin and even tho he kept on usin played lines on dick and stuff his punches still made sense and hit harder...skptik had some stuff in there but he basically was aimin at killin his opponent and not dissin or usin hard punches...structure was blah and flow was ugh just becos u spaced ur bars bro..u had multis yeah but u didnt hit hard with disses on ur opponent... thats it.. be honest in my battles too plz...thanx(sig)
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08-23-05, 06:17 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP:
Voted For: Acumen
Acumen got this. Acumen-Your punches were more witty. Alot easier to read as well as kept me reading. Thats an important thing to do. Humor in your verse as well. Thats always a plus. Skeptik- Your shit was really hard to follow. Your first bar wasn't even really a punch so it put you down a little bit. And you verse didn't make me wanna keep reading. (though i did) It was like after the first like i was like "man, do i have to read this?" Overall-Acumen got this for being doper. Lol.
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