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Uppity Up Up...Checking polls is nice...but we need votes!

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Upping for some more votes on this battle, close it up!!!!

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Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn for more votesssssssssssssss

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chip is hispanic..so...you know...you win.........

Upping for my girl, good drop baby!

The Establishmento!

Voted For: Drama Queen

my vote, is overal drama queen reason for that her structure was immaculate which gave it a better flow, chip ur flow was not good.Her creativity in her verse was far more outstanding than chips her vocab was much expanded...and an overall 8/10 compaired to chips 6/10

v/drama queen

RTF ill leave links later

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rtf^^leave honest and explained vote on either battle......

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Upping for my girl................................

I had a long vote drawn out, pressed "Post Vote" and I need 200 posts. I don't have Chip's feedback but I had Drama Queen's in a notepad document so here it is:

Drama Queen: You're structure was absolutely perfect, every line was the same length so subsequently it flowed well. It also flowed well due to a lot of inners. Good similes and metaphors and was consistently a good piece. I especially liked: When every human eye had his or her share of deadly visions.

Vote for Drama Queen if I could.

Oh word...forgot about the post count...

Well sorry you typed it out for nothing man...thanks for feed though!

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Checking this out...................................

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
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Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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Voted For: Drama Queen

Drama Queen-Ok...good verse.Stayed on topic and shit.Had a basic rhyme scheme..but flow was still good.I liked some of the metas and comparisons you did.Like the eagle/soarin one.Really deep shit here.Only line I didn't like was the one about needin a hug.As it appearing to come outta nowhere and fucked with your wording and all.But overall...good verse...8.8/10

Chip-Really...and I mean...really...fucked up structure.I mean...look at the 1st 2 lines.You seemed to stay on topic..as the concept goes.But your wording was messed as some lines just seemed to come outta nowhere.And ur flow was ite..but the words u rhymed weren't.Like that 2nd to last one...you were rhymin me with me too much.And ur lines weren't deep...they were really basic.Newbish style.so next time..work on structure..like don't have one line so long and the one after so short.Make ur rhymes more complex.ANd drop the newbish style

Vote-Drama Queen
rtf below in 3 days ...or.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207400

fuck Macreep's rascist ass......... good vote from Deranged, although i'm not sure what my newbish style is......... it'll probably go away after a couple more battles.........

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