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Tony Green 1 16.67%
OneStepBeyond 5 83.33%
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Old 08-24-05, 08:43 AM   #1
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Hahaha shit it wasn't posting for me lastnight, but looks like it acctually did. Meh, this makes the 4th post of mine in a row, sorry for the clogging yo.
 
Old 08-24-05, 08:48 AM   #2
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checkin polls........................................
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Old 08-24-05, 11:13 AM   #3
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Old 08-25-05, 02:59 PM   #4
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Damn this was a great battle,i read TG and mad emotional
 
Old 08-25-05, 03:35 PM   #5
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Thanxx man I think I took this one...................
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Old 08-26-05, 02:24 PM   #6
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OSB represent those barndoors across the nation

good drop my e-friend
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Old 08-26-05, 02:26 PM   #7
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oh yeah, ps.....to tony, don't use links in a topical.....ruins the effect, lmlo
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Old 08-26-05, 11:45 PM   #8
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Lol @ that. Veyetal!!!! Sup homeboy. BARNDOOR.....
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Old 08-27-05, 02:24 PM   #9
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Old 08-28-05, 01:00 PM   #10
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Old 08-28-05, 09:28 PM   #11
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Lol @ him thinking he got it......................
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Old 08-30-05, 12:33 AM   #12
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uppiin maybe? ........................................
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Old 09-01-05, 11:14 AM   #13
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My boy should have this. 1-0, keep it up. The Establismento!
 
Old 09-01-05, 08:00 PM   #14
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Why ain't kiddos be voting on this..

Lets go... Soul Rebel said so..
 
Old 09-02-05, 01:26 AM   #15
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Voted For: Tony Green

Tony Green-Nice drop here.Followed topic nicely.Liked the twist in the storyline at end of the verse too.Flow was off at points(mainly the end)... due to some lines not rhyming.Like this one
"I made 6 figures the concert's still going on....
The only connection to my stickly mother is my cell phone"
^^didn't rhyme.
But at the beggining..there were some internals n shit that flowed nicely.Not a very complex verse here...but still good.Keep it up.

One step beyond-Well...you had a more complex verse with metaphors and such.More direct with the topic and shit.But...i didn't enjoy it as much as I did to Tony Green's one.Flow was your biggest problem.Too many lines didn't rhyme at all.Had a good vocab...so that's good.But it didn't really impact ur verse.

Vote-Tony Green
rtf the favor below(it's topical) in 3 days...or this vote will be removed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909
 
 


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