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1 | 16.67% |
OneStepBeyond |
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5 | 83.33% |
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IP:
Hahaha shit it wasn't posting for me lastnight, but looks like it acctually did. Meh, this makes the 4th post of mine in a row, sorry for the clogging yo.
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E-Style, Bitch.
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checkin polls........................................
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got u all confused n shit
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pooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllll lllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz
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"don't assume me Im not what you're used to"
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GeNeRaL
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Damn this was a great battle,i read TG and mad emotional
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Thanxx man I think I took this one...................
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original.
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OSB represent those barndoors across the nation
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don't try....just STFU
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original.
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oh yeah, ps.....to tony, don't use links in a topical.....ruins the effect, lmlo
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Peace, Love, Unity
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Lol @ that. Veyetal!!!! Sup homeboy. BARNDOOR.....
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Nt Your Average
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pollllllllllllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzz.....
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OYD MAFIA
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checkin pollzzzzz ..
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Peace, Love, Unity
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Lol @ him thinking he got it......................
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Peace, Love, Unity
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uppiin maybe? ........................................
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My boy should have this. 1-0, keep it up. The Establismento!
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Why ain't kiddos be voting on this..
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Voted For: Tony Green
Tony Green-Nice drop here.Followed topic nicely.Liked the twist in the storyline at end of the verse too.Flow was off at points(mainly the end)... due to some lines not rhyming.Like this one "I made 6 figures the concert's still going on.... The only connection to my stickly mother is my cell phone" ^^didn't rhyme. But at the beggining..there were some internals n shit that flowed nicely.Not a very complex verse here...but still good.Keep it up. One step beyond-Well...you had a more complex verse with metaphors and such.More direct with the topic and shit.But...i didn't enjoy it as much as I did to Tony Green's one.Flow was your biggest problem.Too many lines didn't rhyme at all.Had a good vocab...so that's good.But it didn't really impact ur verse. Vote-Tony Green rtf the favor below(it's topical) in 3 days...or this vote will be removed ![]() http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909 |
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