aw hell naw! steel even left links........ that's cold playa, that's cold.........

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Aye buzin u aint cold n u don't keep no steel, stop
Matta fact u from memphis,tell me 1 dude in ya hood thas still hot
3...i'm sure there's a better way to rip Mephis than to say "not one dude there is hot".
Rvz pimp so i guess u pull chicks
My rhyme lines like bullets cuz i load 16 on u like a full clip
1....not a punch...didn't diss
C.ghost u aint heard a me u gots ta know
When i drop my verse like a dam in da river it'll stop ya flow
3....dumb and self glorifing
Or i take it to the memphis language,"stop it ho"
Somebody shoulda told u i rock wit flow
2...self glorifing
And niggas smoke afta a loss so afta this battle go out and copt some drow
0...not gonna finish this bar?
I Know im Nice i give a fuck about a vote
And u a pimp wit money so if i see ya fancy car in the street i Jack it like a coat(jacket)
3....2nd line stretched..and played concept
And every thing i saw niggaz dint know iy was my style that they moldin
And u aint no balla only silver in ya mouth is the gun dat im holdin
5.....probably ur best bar
Neva 4 get wit my style u gon remember me
U da pimp out of memphis, u aint Terrance howard this aint hustle n flow
2...not rhyming?
I move fool ass niggaz around ta corners sayin hustle n go
0?.....?wtf?

This battles Gravy...But!..I dont need No~Toast!
"He Wanna Be Patrick Swayze" Peep tha name...See~Ghost.(C.Ghost)
5..ok..
He's weak Folks!....Hidin your Record,but word seem tah Travel.
I think ur ah Joke,Because You Complain ery'time you lost a Battle!
6...LMAO!!....dope personal
Look fool Your Wack!.......So why you constantly Happy!?!
You off track... Imma hand you a"L" ta match tha 1 with ur aunt Jackie!
5....decent
Yeah,thats right!.... Cold pimp hard on ah Hoe!
Fuck ownin this Dike!...I rather do 'em like trash an Disgard of his flow!
2....not feelin this

Ok..this was one sided..Coldsteel got this shit.

C.Ghost..you may have had twice as much lines as him..but most of ur verse was bassically self glorifin.The only attempts at personals that you had were the ones bout his location..which suked.Cuz..how's you just gonna say "not one hot dude in his hood"?That's basic and shitty.I saw ur attempt at wordplay as well..with the jacket one..but execution was pitiful

Vote-Coldsteel
rtf below in 3 days....or this vote will be removed
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206789

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if i could vote....

open-cold
finsih-cold
flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-cold
multies-cold
wordplay-cold
vocab-cold

v/coldsteel ......

RTF pls on my two battles in my sig..thanks

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Krooked VS InfiniteStan

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

aight you won this

ok this was an easy battle to vote on

C:you won this becuase of structure and becuase you all out just woned him and what not, but you aint know pimp i bet you hav enever even pimped a girl out, LOL see me ive pimped a bitch out and i know for a fact you havent so whatever

C;you lost but you had some Ok lines all you need to do is elevate and learn some shit. RV will help you elavte and after a few months you 2 should battle again...

vote=cold

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