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Voted For: Unrestricted

ok, les go, bout to fry this dude that goes by the gay name stan
the only thing thats infinite is how many ways u can be whack man
in this battle, me dissing u, ur wishing that id stop that
remeber, every "moment" u spit wont be a kodak
dude i own u like prostitutes working on the streets
u get off on otha dudes given detailed descriptions of their meats
thinking u all hard but ill turn u into scrap metal
have u turning as far away from rap as heavy metal
dog, u cant hold ur own like parapalegics, ur whack
ur eminem wana be ass cant win, jus face facts
stan, "dear mr. im too good to write my fans", ur fucking whack*
thats thw whole reason i didnt write ur ass back

*quote from the song Stan by eminem

most is whack cuz i had to rush....


i give him a 8.5/10 he had a few punches....n an no structure but he flowed



I set something up with out even callin you out//
thats right , cuz i do what i wanna do so shut ur mouth//
i hope i post this up alot faster than u//
so when u see it , u can take a good look//
and now u got something to write about//
cuz you just read my shit//and u know what im all about//you gotta take the wack ass name out//
cuz i called u out and u didnt even call a timeout//
and i know u got them little pretty pictures//a guy with a gun , next picture should be of u , sitting alone with cum ur nut//we all know y u got cum in ur nuts//
lets blame ur little dick//it missed and shot right at your nuts//if your listening real care full, youll know that im not makin much sense // but fuck it ill beat chu anyways with ur sissy ass defense//...y try//its like taking a bitch and make her moan and cry!!!!!!!!!


7.5/10 didnt really feel ur flow or structure......u ahd a couple of punches.....

NO HATE PLZ RTF MAN

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(2)Me vs. wyteknyte(2)

(1)Me vs. Flow Verse(1)

Voted For: Unrestricted

besides the fact that the rules said no biting unrestricted gets this mayne...he had better punches even tho they seemed a lil weak tome...structure was better wordplay was much mor decent too...he was focused on making sense and dissin and not twisting words till they sensless like stan...his verse had more flow and i must say compliments u cme up with a more decent verse hence the rush...

stan u need to elevate....take it as u want it bro but its an opinion...your verse woulda been of gd quality if only u didnt over-use those played lines on 'cum' and lil dick and so on...ur verse didnt flow and there was no astonishing punch or wordplay...your verse was more on the basics and this i can understand cos theres always a begining but the structure needs panel-beating...feel me?...your verse seemed more adequate for and audio...sorry yo but keep on tryin you will do better someday....


honest votes in 1 of my battles would be appreciated thanx....

wun

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Voted For: Unrestricted

betta multi's and puches than infinatestan thats wat i think

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Voted For: Unrestricted

punhces connected better, flow came thru due to more solid structure.
closure is weak though, I felt like voting against you due to the wackness and the fal off due to you closing like shops for eskimo's.