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08-29-05, 09:03 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP:
Excellent concept first of all, the ending reminds me of a piece I once wrote.
You worked it out very nicely, speaking on several aspects of being an angel and how they are perceived by mortals. The imagery was great, you used clear pictures to describe the theory in your words. The emotion was there as well, focusing on the tears and the pain of the angels, how they are not appreciated and such. The vocab was on point, had a good complexity to it all, flow was good! Favor is returned...
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08-30-05, 03:45 AM
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in your system
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uppin....................
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09-01-05, 10:44 PM
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in your system
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bump this......
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09-02-05, 01:04 AM
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HAHAHAHAH!..i onno
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Emotion was dope..Loved it
Complexity was nice....Loved it Flow was Good..Loved it Vocab Was nice...Loved it Overall....9.5/10....DOPE shit man..keep it up...
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09-02-05, 02:01 PM
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in your system
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thanks buddy...
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09-02-05, 10:21 PM
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New to RV
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my OM will be better
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09-11-05, 10:09 AM
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in your system
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IP:
Quote:
shut up bitch.....
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09-10-05, 03:18 AM
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in your system
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uppin....................................
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09-26-05, 05:16 PM
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in your system
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bumpin..........
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09-28-05, 12:40 PM
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Bringin The Rukas
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IP:
good flow, good read and good vocab ill give it a 9/10
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09-28-05, 12:44 PM
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Light Weight
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Prettty sweet dude... 8/10 no doubt
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