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Old 08-30-05, 04:29 PM   #1
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ehhh to be honest i didnt like it....quality was gud....lyrics was aight....beat didnt like it...chorus was to repitive....flow was choppy to me....overalll not gud but not bad
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Old 08-30-05, 04:31 PM   #2
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this was decent...i'm not really liking your style, kinda robotish...you have a decent presence and your flow is pretty good...you are confident, this is the type of song to have swagger with and i wasn't feeling that swagger, but it was nice none the less...quality wasn't really all that, maybe just too much reverb or something...but good looking out, good shit...
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Old 08-30-05, 05:01 PM   #3
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Hook is gobbage dog, hardly can hear what you saying.


Flow is blahhh to me, some lines is stretched wayyy to long.

Lines wasn't that hot to me.

Iunno if I'm weird or ya'll crazy, I wasn't feeling this shit.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206742
^ go leave some feedback on that shit...
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Old 08-30-05, 05:32 PM   #4
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WTF
This aint studio quality
ROFLMAORMFOAOO @ sayin it was studio quality
the beat is kinda weak.
your vocals are too low.
your flow is...lame soundin
you sound bored.
and the chorus is ummm NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Not feelin the hook, not at all.
and the devil shit was pointless
son, this shit is wack, fa real.
step ya game up.
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Old 08-30-05, 05:32 PM   #5
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iight thanks alot
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