eeewwww @ this beat, terrible thats just personal taste, ouch ur flow started really off, but u pulled it back on, slipped a couple times u hesitated on a line or two, emotion is pretty good, delivery is cool too, lyrics are good, not a bad track, some stuff needs tighten though

Thanks for all the feedback. This was my first serious track. I'm gonna re-record it and its gonna be my first track on my CD.

Beat is raw...

flows nice, lol at seafood line

good flow, on beat..

wow this is impressive, missin a hook...

flow a lil off in second verse,
back on beat...then cut off WTF?!

Overall man, this was ill..serious, i was feelin it a lot, props.

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Yay! MSN is downlading but it's takin too long cause my computer sucks.

uppin for more feed. im really tryna elevate to the top.

this is a good drop fam...flow is nice for the most part...fell off a lil in the second verse...lol @ no hook...overall this is a good track...something i could jam too...looking forward to our collab too fam...keep droppin...rtf on "We Gangsta"

damn i was liking the track but it stopped all of a sudden...anyways nice...beat was cool u flowed pretty well and that was quite creative....(wish i cud be an audio head too...lucky asses)...well keep it up..

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shit man this is very, very good. im likin basically everythin about it, beats gud, flows perfectly on (cant remember it goin off once), dope multis etc. decent track (although you need to get that sudden stop, thing sorted out loooool) 9/10

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