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ThA NoToRiOuS D 5 100.00%
Big_O 0 0%
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Old 09-23-05, 08:17 AM   #16
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

To the ThA NoToRiOuS D
Ight i aint got much to say homie
0...no punch..nothing at all in this bar.
other then it should be illegal to battle a gay
he's crazy hes in love with patrick swayze,
1....wtf?...first off...gay is played..and it doesn't get more basic that this.
i think your minds a little hazy
you know who your battleing its me the one and only
0...didn't rhyme...and wasn't a punch
Big O so get on your knees and start to blow
cause compared to me you got no flow
2...first line where u actually seemed to diss..but..still weak
My flows easy to see like a black guy in the snow
yo i know that was alittle low
0...you not dissing the other guy.
i had this battle from hello
so peace i gotta go
0........wtf is this?

come on dawg ur record is horrible
i got u in display making people think you adorable
2.....weak.
true story//niggas hate me cause of the crew im holdin
but fags like u are just mad to see a gangsta rollin
1....not much of a punch here
and ayo you all around my dick like a magnum wrapper
but i see you in the lobby claming u an R.O.C rapper
3......still weak..but this mite be the 1st punch in this battle
ayo dawg your rhymes are worse then debt
ill hit your block up and leave you soaking wet
1...the 1st line wuz decent..2nd wuz shit.
if i hear you talkin dat shyt,imma send u above
n make u fit into bags that are the same colors as gloves
0....no punch.
big o be running by my drive bies when i pass by
n thats because im throwing up my signs up real high
0....no punch.
focus on ma shyt and give niggas some real talk
so bloods can skip to it and the crips can still walk
0...no punch.

WOW @ this battle.
FOr real.
Both of you need elevation.In case you guys don't know..a punch is something that has to diss the other guy.Sayin that you'll "hit they block up" isn't a diss to the other guy.But Tha Notorious D got this.WHy?
Becuz Big_O put lines like these
"To the ThA NoToRiOuS D
Ight i aint got much to say homie"
"i think your minds a little hazy
you know who your battleing its me the one and only"
"My flows easy to see like a black guy in the snow
yo i know that was alittle low"
"i had this battle from hello
so peace i gotta go"
^^wat the fuck are these lines doing in a battle?Make every bar diss the other guy.Instead of being pointless like these ones.

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Old 09-23-05, 12:22 PM   #17
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

ThA NoToRiOuS D -

Best Line - if i hear you talkin dat shyt,imma send u above
n make u fit into bags that are the same colors as gloves

Worst Line - true story//niggas hate me cause of the crew im holdin
but fags like u are just mad to see a gangsta rollin

Big_O - Weak. Didnt flow well, and you had no real punches.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - To the ThA NoToRiOuS D
Ight i aint got much to say homie
other then it should be illegal to battle a gay
he's crazy hes in love with patrick swayze,

OVERALL - This battle was pretty weak. Both had no punlines at all. D you flowed iight, and had some ok rhymes, so you get my vote. Big you need to start usin' punchlines and work on your flow.

Vote - ThA noToRiOuS d
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