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09-27-05, 08:25 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: BA87 A0AC
beats ok...
right off the bat i can tell your delivery/emotion needs some work some parts of the song jus sound like your reading your lyrics off it hurts your flow a lot im thinking that if you up your emotion, your flows gon increase a hell of a lot with it...so work on that first. lyrics wise its str8, i was actually feeling the hook quite a bit... overall a decent track, just work on that emotion man... hit me back wit some feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2460436
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09-28-05, 04:34 PM
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IIte dawg will hit back with feed 2morrow, yo thanks and Ill be workin on the emotion alot
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