iight you came in hard...only thin is ya vocals same a bit too high...but the flows hardd about time you've changed up a bit fam..lol shits sick good job chorus catchy nice nice but i think you should adlib the "AYO ITS TRIPLE" wit an aggresive attitude try it and see how it sounds lyrically you came good as usual good track fam i'll give you 8.5/10 and peep that # 1 Contender when you get a chance my nigga 1ne...

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...Bronxs Finest NUCCA!!!..FaLL BaCk ...

damn, man..... this shit was hot. prolly my fav track of yours man. fo reel.... got this shit on my iPod. lol but damn, man loved the beat...... and then your flow was ill here, switched it up a lot. had some ill lines all through-out, multi's and shit.. nice vocab. damn man, shit was dope. loved the hook. lol Like how you put multi's in hook too. Quality ill, mixin' and etc. overall, dope as hell track yo....... lol 9.7/10....... hot track.......... pc one.

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Man. Your Officially One Of The Few People I'd lsten To Outside Of Rv. Be Proud Trip.

But yeh, this song is nice man. I like the beat. you come in nice with top flow. Like OMB Said I would much rather pay for this type of shit than 50 Cent albums. You Keep Gettin better Man, I coulndt believe you werent signed when i head somebody tell me. his Just Proves you Should Be.

Stay Up Man.

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Was feeling this quite a bit. Had a lot of energy, shown through your pressence as always. Lyrics were good too, and your flow was on point the enitre track. After first listen I couldn't really catch anything that you needed to improve on with this joint, but if I notice something later on I'll let you know. Keep up the good work man, and we still gotta collab.

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yo man the last verse is the sicknesssss, i mean the sicknesss. hype beat to flow to, on point for sure. Hook is nice, no singing so it's even better, just messing with you. Overall song had good buildup until the final verse which you killed.......nice track...

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A.I.

hook good i like it like the beat like ur emotion on the track the energy is good i personally thought this sone was ok but i wouldnt bump this jsut now my type of shit i liekd like i see no light somebody tell me shit like that baby gurl yea but it was good id listen to it b4 i listened to 97% of 50 sents music

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solid shit man this track really dope....lovin the hook....beat is really good....flow was good dam this track is really good.....got it saved in mah pc too

your flow is hot on this, emotion, dubs/adlibs, and delivery all good for this type of track.. i like the versatility of your flow on the beat (the better way to put it)... feeling the etcha sketch line and fisher price typewriter line.. uh oh, internals and multis, k time for chorus - catchy, very catchy... damn you soooo far from monotone on the second verse it's crazy, you overcame every claim against you. Your mom is proud. Yes, I am. lol @ how you say bitch... Don't be taking my shining word emphasis lol!!! "Bitch..." For real tho, it's a nice track overall.

Pretty good. Keep up tha work........
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Beat: too techno soundin
Flow:good
Rhyming: nice
Delivery: good...but ur raspy voice I am not a fan off


Overall: it's a good track...and I liked the etch a sketch line


7.5/10


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my bad for takin so long lol.. bu tyeah.. dude this shyt was just plain dope man.. seriously.. and u didnt just come with ur usual self.. u came with somethin new.. n somethin original.. lyrics were dope as hell as usual.. and delivery was perfect.. iono wut to say for u to improve man.. jst keep writtin lol

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Beat is nice...Fuckin nice quality...damn...nice flow...fuck yeah...mos def feelin the lyrics...tight delivery, and I love that voice...

Not a negative thing to say about this track.

Word. Keep it up.

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this track was tight trip...like some of the people above i told u on aim that i was feelin this but i'll rtf here too...i'm liking this...lyrically it was great...i'ma multi man...every line but u always seem to wow me without alot of multi's and shit...everything just came together on this joint...ya experienced at this so u ain't gotta work on mic presence and shit like that so i can't really say anything bad bout this cause their wasn't anything bad...lol...overall this was a tight track...hook was sorta catchy too...caught myself nodding to this track while i was talking to u on aim...lol...i think this is d/l worthy

yo first of all WHY THE FUCK AINT YOU SIGNED AGAIN?

and yup im listening to your step up song and that song is destined to get slapped by my two twevles in my car, LOL word that song is sick


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this song was coo it started out real nice and ended nice

1verse, you started out with my attention and i like how you didnt have an intro when the beat droppped you just ripped it, LOL your lyrics where real nice, i love songs that talk about this type of shit, word nothing more to say ecept im gonna download it


chorus, i wasnt sure when the chorus came in, you should have added some eckos, or somehting, and other than that it was dope and kept my attention literally i stopped everything i was diong and just listened

2nd verse, you once again lept my attention and spit some dope ass lyrics i would say i liked your first verse best, dont know why but i did, but some of your lines where mad, dope and you flow switched up a lil witch kept me staring at my CPU screen and listening

3rd...i liked this verse best, real dope shit, i liek when poeple talk abuot hti s type of shit, LOL wordness, this was definitly ment to be at a club or some type of function...i owuld now say this was your best verse, now that i think of it.....

yo i couldnt really find any major flaws or really any flaws but if i listned alot more i would find somehting ...i dont know, LOL dope shit

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listening as i type...delivery into verse was ok...beats meh...lyrics aight...vocals work well with the beat but beat could be a bit louder coz it sounds like a strong beat but is too quiet...flows cool...voice...i unno man you good...but vocally you sound like a kareoke Xzibit...and i ain't feelin that IMO...ya got ya own style but it's like Ja's vocal resemblence to DMX ya feel me?...hook was ok...rhymings ok...it's a good joint...keep droppin quality is decent...but i thought i'd point out a few things i thought could be better instead of ac'in like a crazed boy band fan unllike some of these guys in here...but keep droppin RTF in my sig (RG Round 1)

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