flow means nothin in this, your dumb... they just should keep out all the exra's and write normal

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yeah good point, I'ma make it flow nicer next time

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Frauds sucked, all he said was he was gonna put you under the welcome mat, wich makes no sense, "key" wordplay is played the fuck out anyways.

v/Vaskez

still Vaskez, your punch coulda been A LOT better.

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your punch is your goin to push him under a welcome mat? and i get the key wordplay, but how is that a punch?
v/ V
he called u names with his meta, which is a punch

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yeah I know Jack, I underestimated

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

anyway, 3-4, more votes please

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

who's winning this butthole?

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at the moment it's the other dude well let's get some more votes

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

real close here
props to both
i was digging vas bar better, cuz frauds was kinda crowded
but coulda went either way
v/ vaskez

V/Vaskez.....this was an ight one.......but Vask he came wit the harder hittin punch

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thanks, 5-4 to me

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Vaskez, your concept was really good, but you executed it pretty poorly. Either way, I honestly don't know how anyone could vote for Fraud. His bar was ass, there was no punch to it.

Vote - Vaskez

thanks, here're my votes:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2473727
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210538
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210533
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2473801

6-4

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel

Word, make it look real pretty or people won't vote for you, lol.

A Alias Or A Waste of Space? I Couldn't Tell; Flames? Musta Held 'em Back And Fled
I'll Assure This: Destroy U With This "Key" And " Push U Under The Welcome Mat" Instead
As played as "key" wordplay is, I got a feeling that this bar could've connected. Just wasn't worded right, and that results in a good ol' "wtf?".

vs.

Girls, screwing ugly losers should be a crime, resulting in punishments galore
And I guess the government agrees cos doing fraud's punishable by law
A little stretched here, first line could've been shortened without effecting the bar. I've used the "fraud" play before, but it doesn't really matter considering you actually came with a decent punch.

V// Vaskez

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Vote: Vaskez

Just word your punch better next week to make it come harder.