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Old 10-08-05, 06:30 AM   #1
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cheers for the crits... uppin for more
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Old 10-09-05, 07:18 AM   #2
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uppin this again... i replied to plenty of u cunts
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Old 10-09-05, 03:03 PM   #3
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Old 10-09-05, 10:09 PM   #4
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uppin this..... fuckin sleepy bastards
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Old 10-09-05, 10:19 PM   #5
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I like this track actually, besides that other uk guy and kingz, I think you leady are one of the better uk artists on this site and well one of the better uk artists I've heard. Your voice sounds very good for a uk cat, your accent is there, and personally I don't like them accents. But for some reason I like your style, flow is fast and solid. emotion aint to bad either. Your lyrics are fa sho good and on track. overall this is a tight track nice hook and beat everything man.

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Old 10-10-05, 08:37 AM   #6
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Beat: beat itself loud as hell
Flow: not a fan of UK rappers...but the flow worked on the beat
Rhyming: nothing major either way...I cudn't pick out a scheme
Delivery: I don't like it...I am not a fan of UK rappers...E.C. is the best I've heard...I can tolerate him...and Mad Dog's voice is unique... Intermental is from the UK and doesn't really have a accent


Overall: decent track...topic been rapped about 10000000x before...Tito and I did a track like this...but the words are true, I guess...



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Old 10-10-05, 09:32 AM   #7
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Old 10-10-05, 03:13 PM   #8
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Old 10-10-05, 06:36 PM   #9
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The levels on the vocals shoulda probably went down a tad or had some reverb put on em so they were softer on the intro. The drop of music at the intro reminded me of a Bjork track called "aurora". Nice sub on the "listen to your speakers" panned whisper.

The beat is alright in it self, suits what the song's about. The flow is rushed in some spots, like 1 syl every few bars would cause you to rush to finish em, like on the bar that says "weren't you the same bred". The hook feels the same IMO. Was the first verse a 16? seems short for some reason.

Second verse gets to the meat of the issue and names refference points which is always good. The thing that deterred me fomr attaching to this song is that there's some words that rhyme in a UK accent and they don't rhyme as my mind translates the words' accent to what I'm used to, so some stuff like, say....."feelin" and "speakers" dosen't lock up. Oh also, some bars didn't end in a rhyme for the couplet, like the bar with the G8 summit. Says something liek "they rapper pay for the G8 Summit, fuck it (I think) thne eventually ends with "african country" which dosen't lock up imo.


The only thing I'd change about it though is the emotion in the flow. Not that it's bad, jsut that there's only one emotion for the entire song which started to make it feel redundant after a while.

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