uppin.............................................

Voted For: John C.

JOHN

...yo
all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win
cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin
come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed
your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID
replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy
you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key'
this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory
where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete
cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen?


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this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission
indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat
or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee"

vs

nuttin

overall this was a preaty weak battle....i was seein anything that really caught my attetnion from eiother of you but....John won cuz the other guy sucked....you had no good punches or wordplay.....and you rhymed through with through....i know you were meaning different throughs but you spelled it the same and some people may not catch that......but overall John won for not bein as bad


please hit this battle up fairly thanks
defined vs legend

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Voted For: John C.

ok good battle both yall..

one mic - your verse was pretty good, alright flow, need to expand on your vocabulary a bit more and structure, the punches were good, need a little bit more wordplay and multies, but overall it was a good read had some good parts..

john - your verse was very good i didnt expect this from you, your flow was good, some lines were a bit stretched but good, the vocabulary was good, you had some nice wordplay and i thought your verse was very on point and punches hit when they were thrown..

overall - john... no hate.

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.::BattleZ::.

Voted For: John C.

One Mic

yo, you cant rap, your only skill is 'bitin names'
im'a turn up the heat, make your life a shame
Not a punch..
obviously you underestimated me, i produce battle scars
your rhymes are filled with myst and darkness like your avatar
Decent..
you cant handle bars, me beatin you is my fate
its funny, cuz this guy jus' realised wrestlins fake
Nah..
you so scared of me, you probablly wet the matress
this guys jus' had his first erection......when he was lukin at Brad Pitt
Didn't connect..
hold on, cuz imma ride through....
stop rappin, cuz all you good for, is takin orders at the mcdonalds drive through
Not a punch..

John C.

all i need is one mic, for one flow, and one win
cuz you'll just get one vote with luck, it runs thin
Not a punch..
come again with that talant and you'll be re-slayed
your raps is PLANNED, so in a way they're PREPAID
Decent..
replace my legs with stumps cuz i cant stand this fake enemy
you'd have better text success if you just pressed 'any key'
Ehh.. decent..
this spent emcee just bought himself a ticket to the factory
where we make mics in mass, so his raps here is obsolete
Nah..
cant top this heat, so why you cook in the kitchen?
this murders so ceaseless that i took intermission
Not a punch..
indecision if i should end it with this asshole's defeat
or turn ya shirt red with bullets, call it a "casual-tee"
Decent..

Overall, one mic had one decent punch and the rest either didn't connect, or weren't punches. His wordplay was pretty basic and wittiness lacked in his verse. John C. had three decent punches in his verse, a few that didn't connect and only two that weren't punches. Two of his didn't connect, but his wordplay was worded better, and his concepts were better as well. So, in conclusion, John C. gets my vote for the better overall verse.

Vote - John C.

Voted For: John C.

This was murkage..

One mic- you lacked punches, flow, personals, wordplay, complexity. and the list goes on

John c. You had your share of decent lines along with some nice ones, good verse.

V/ John C.

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