you should DQ that whack ass vote...uppin for this battle and for real votes

Yea You Can DQ that vote only Real Votes Allowed

But You Have to Report it If you Want it Gone Im not Bothering With It

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I PMed Strobe about it........Oh yeah...and im upping this.

What tha fuck is up with "*" or w/e they are called an spelt....

This battle is....

Voted For: Satans Spawn

lmao...once again u merk anotherone

spawn-your verse was short n sweet...ur punches was down to the point..nothing that hard hitting but worth more than ur opponent...ur structure and flow was remarkable....personals was dope...overall 6/10 keep at it

jay r- ur a joke lol no hate but "they call me the don" if ur gunna take someones lines.....dont make it 50 cent lmao...ok anyways...mostly self glore...nothing to special or hard hitting overall i think u needa elevate fo real 4/10

v/satans spawn

rtf wen eva u want...no battles open now so...

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Upppppppppppppppppppppin.......................... ..............

Aii Yo Thanx 4 da Vote

Still Uppin ,................................

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

vote for satans spawn>>>... you got my vote cuz your structure was pretty perfect and beacuse even though you didnt write much. it looked like u knew wat you were doing and it seems like your better than wat you just did.. also because of " fruity pucnhes than a violen...
.. yeah and your vocab was also pretty koo..but next time drop a harder verse and and also drop more lines.


Big Jay R. you need to fix your structure.. you need to know that you gotta keep control of it.. you also gotta drop harder punch lines.. but your vocab was better and played harder but it seemed like your just getting the hang of it.. but just elevate.. no hate. just elevate...

Infinite_Stan

Thanks for the help man...Im not askin for votes Im asking for CONSTRUCTIVE! Critism and thats what you gave. Record isnt why i rap. Its to have fun and get better.

Uppin...................................for The Last Vote for 3-0 Ko

Nice Battle Big Jay

Maybe We will meet again and battle

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Yep Its Getting Close To Closing ........................

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^^i have an open battle please rtf with an honest vote...1

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Voted For: Satans Spawn

Stanza had a better verse overall...punches to the whole concept...JR strcture was way off and the flow of it seemed forced in some points..punches didnt hit as hard as Stanzas...vocab was basic from both...this battle was basically one-sided the whole way...no hate just use this as motivation to become less wack.

vote-Stanza....