Voted For: InfiniteStan

ok this was a pretty weak battle... but lets break it down..

Ryda - your verse was ok, the structure was realli off i didnt like it at all, you had some very, very corney lines they were played as hell, some punches you had were good, the vocabulary needs to be worked on becuase it was a bit shallow in that area, need some multis to make your flow better, but not a bad try.. keep elevatin...

IS - your verse was constructed alot better, punches hit harder, your structure was on point, had some nice vocabulary, the verse flowed pretty well throughtout, some of ur shit didnt realli make sence but overall i gave you this because of harder punches, better flow and nice structure good work

overall - IS

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Infinite_Stan V.s Ryda..

c'mon people.. vote for this!!!

Voted For: InfiniteStan

InfiniteStan

im takin control of this louzzy cat who dreams a win
he had his chance to shyne his lights but were to dim
Nah..
u dug a rabbit hole but you dug to deep to get back out
im da night prowler dat smelled ur fear without a doubt
Not a punch..
your a dick "RYDA " and you still aint got a single vote
just drop the verse or the towel cuz youz a funny joke
Didn't connect..
my beats and rhymes are melting you down like liquid
im the hard solid "RYDA" or u can just call me wicked
Not a punch..
your mind is hurting and crying cuz my shit is pure
my position of power diteriates with out a cure.
Still not a punch..
now u got it twisted thinking you got the best agility
but im Infinite_Stan kid so picture the possibilitys
Not a punch..

Ryda

Infinatestan hope u came wit a gameplan
cause wen i KO u you'll fell lonley like a divorced man
Didn't connect..
this kid is 17 and he is a pussy says he is gettin honeys
but all he is fucking is infladable dummys
Not a punch..
it says he is from the redland
afta this battle mentally u'll be drippin red man
man u got nothin i was rappin before ur life began
Not a punch..
compare our rhymes im tippin the scale
cause my rhymes r betta and i now ill prevail
Not a punch..
i seen ur battle wit unrestricted
wit ur weak lines u dont now im already ahead
Not a punch..
this is the battle for the avatar
you and ur rhymes are bizarre
wen i spit you'll run like i am a police car
Too simple..
cause u scared of me u aint no real MC
you cant even beat me i guarantee
Not a punch..
this kid thinks he's tough cause he called me out
i'll merk this kid then he'll now wat im bout
im gunna win this battle aint no doubt
Not a punch..
He's tryin to figure out my game like he's a scout
This kid im deffinatley gunna bang out
Not a punch..
Thats it is it game over for your rap Infinatestan
But dont worry u can go back to being an eminem fan
The concept had potential, but it was worded wrong..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good at all. InfiniteStan only had two punches, neither of which connected. The rest of his bars were worded into statements, which amount to nothing in battles. He attempted wordplay.. it usually didn't come out, but it was their nonetheless. Ryda went almost twice as many lines as InfiniteStan did. Ryda also had two punches in his verse, neither of which connected. Ryda attempted more wordplay, but it didn't come through for him. But, in the end, InfiniteStan gets my vote. He came with half as many lines as Ryda, but came with just as many punches and just as good wordplay.

Vote - InfiniteStan

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League, too.

upping for this !!!



vote..


Inifinite vs Ryda

Voted For: InfiniteStan

v/ infinite

reasons- he actually had punches. and some of his lines had nice humor in them.. decent drop

ryda- you need to upp ya vocab, punches, flow... read some battles in the efl, n you'll know what i mean. word