uppin!!!!!! c'mon, 50 views and hardly any replies!!??

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

*cough*...........

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

But when written breaks boundaries and builds bonds.
writing captures moments,so that one moment lives on.

I Neva Read Ah OM Like This Before Lol Dis Shit Was Aight Tho, Feelin Ya Concept & Da Examples U Gave...Serious

8/10

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good! I try to be original lol! I'll RTF on w/e man, thanx 4 the feed...

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

like your sig........ ok........ great metas and voc......... nice, original concept........ not sure what was goin on with the structure, but it wasn't bad....... wow....... this iz a really good piece........ chip iz my boy, he knows what he's talkin about........ i'd give u an overall 9/10..... keep writing...........

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"i'm not deep, you're shallow..... rid of your women, money, power, greed, pride....... only then will you be truly free. i'm not asking you to walk on water....... just float with me."
".........you thinking i'm poor because i don't have any money, now that's rich."

Thanx V.much for the feed..

lots of peeps dont get structure on RV so lemme explain. I Study poetry and the use of structure is V.important in a piece. Short, quick lines are absolute, they give a sense of making a statement,like 'Diction is my addiction' I've tried to use alliteration, enjambment, short and long lines to create the effect that i want. I duno if i've succeeded lol but i tried. For evry1 on RV that thinks structure of poetry or OM's shuld be all the lines the same length, that is wrong.

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

SOMEBODY FINALLY GETS IT!!!!!!!!! B = my new favorite poet!

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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ooooh yeah! lol

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

wow.. this was beautiful :'(

You got that "way with words" thing.
I liked this alot. RTF on.. nah I'm playin.

good job.

lol thank uuuuuu deph! any1 else? any1.........is this thing on?

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

guess not goddamit, if any1 looks in here plz leave feed cuz im desperately tryin to get better.

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!

hey good piece fo sho.......

Spilt tears, mixed with ink,
create a cocktail of broken dreams;
or stories of purest love.
Language can be a barrier.
^^^^fav lines

u got some mad talent aint neva seen none of ur shit on here b4 but i sure would like to c some more of it...........1

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