for all these view there sure is a lil bit of post and votes..........

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Voted For: Black Arts

Mr. Multie-You had an expected newbie verse, you had extremely annoying structure...you dont have to nessacarly number your bars man its extremely annoying...and all the dots...thats gay too.......umm for your first battle you had some decent punches and attempts at personals.....overall not that powerfull verse...5/10

Black Arts- Your verse made me sad...i thought ud elevated a bit...but still weak punches.....still your punches were far more stronger and exceptable than ur opponents...your personals were appealing and noticable...structure needs to be upped...but overall...6/10

v/Black arts....

rtf in a couple days when the battle is up...1

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Mystic Mystic Mystic..............you vote needs to be DQ'd for the simple fact that
if he's knows nothing about me how could he do personal and if i kno nothing about him
thas y i didn't use personals..........worst feed i've seen ina while cuz im far from a noob
...........................do i smell a Dick Ride........? already lol i'll make sure it get dq'd
just for inadequate feedback thanx fo ya time

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Voted For: Mr. Multie

Mr. Multie



This nigga's a pro? bet you haven't enter'd the zone vet
I'd tell'em to think outside the box..................................
....................................but he's not leave'n his home yet
Could have been worded better.. still decent, though.
You can be lost and caught in the rain.............................
................................................st ill wouldn't be found ill
The only way you'll catch wins from me............................
....................................is if you smelled me from downhill
Nah.. didn't connect..
It's obvious i aint knew to this, you the type...................
...........................................that would lie bout dumb shit
And come up with an lame excuse like.............................
......................"he's a noob!, i keyed something up quick
Could have been worded so much better..
This is easy see ima handle this dude wit ease
Gave'em a shot for the win..............................................
................................but he'll lose tryna shoot the breeze
Your concepts are decent, but your wording kills 'em..
Im dope you wack, its safe to say opposites really attract
Black we may have color in common..................................
.......but we're not twins so sorry i haven't met my match
Oh, my god.. this line could have been ILL. You messed it up, yo. You should have said something like;

I'm dope.. you suck.. it's easy to see you'll fall and lose kid
We're both black.. but your only it because of all the bruises

That would have been dope. Good concept, nonetheless.

Black Arts

How the hell this kid gonna challenge me nigga's a dumb fuck,
Got it more twist then if the mic lead was round his throat6 like nunchucks
Decent wordplay.. not a good punch..
i'll disable this kid lyrically, the faggot shit is meaningless,
Jacko could have his hand down your pants, and STILL not be "feelin it"
Played to shit..
I'll cut this niggas rhymes outta existance without a doubt
Lyrically I'll break the spine of his rhyme book quicker than Bill bust in Monica mouth
Nah.. played..

Overall, Mr. Multie had some decent concepts, but worded most of them wrong.. however, Black Arts came with a bunch of played lines (Jacko and Bill Clinton?), therefore making them not good at all. So, in conclusion, Mr. Multie came with the more solid verse. With some upgrading with his wording he could be pretty good.

Vote - Mr. Multie

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record.

you can get it dq'd, i did the vote quick....but i dont d/r sry

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Mystic if you say so sweet heart...........meh...dont kno what came over me act'n noob like that bout a lil dr vote *sigh* oh well im still the best dancer thoh

*Pop Locks* then *Break Dances to the Robot*

and what? lmao

oh and Mem thanx but im not really a text head i do mostly topicals and beats so ya kno
i'll keep that in mind thoh..........wouldn't hurt to try text again...........and yea that would've been a dope line lol

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Voted For: Mr. Multie

k. The periods and the numbers showing the lines are annoying, drop them. Also, you used a 'win/wind' line twice.

Oh shit, meant to leave feedback, get that removed.

Voted For: Mr. Multie

Punches - Mr.Multie
Meta - None
Personals - None
Flow - Mr Multie
Structure - Black Arts

Best Line Outta The Whole Battle:
Im dope you wack, its safe to say opposites really attract-9
Black we may have color in common..................................
.......but we're not twins so sorry i haven't met my match-10

- Mr.Multie

Other than that .. vote goes to Multie