I need to know what state both of you are from @ ike and implicit

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Dat track was hot....good shit fellas 9.5/10

Ight, pretty decent track, let me break it down....

1st Verse:

Pretty good verse, vocab was really good but flow was average. There were a few parts that you held on with the last word, which through you off on the next verse. Practice your flow more so you can become more confident with every verse.

2nd Verse..
This is the first time I've heard Ike, and I am impressed. Your delievery was your strongest point on this track. You took chances with your flow and did very well. However, the beginning of your verse, you came very strong and conifident, but fell off near the end. Your vocab was very average. But still a good drop.

3rd Verse
This is definitly a better verse then before. Your flow was a lot better, nothing really wrong wit this verse, except that your presence fell off in a few places. That can be easily fixed wit practice.

Overall really good track.....

8.8/10

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Grim

pretty hot track man.....1 st verse flow fell off sometimes........but not that bad.....2nd verse was dope....strong and proper....3rd verse was a lot better than 1st flow didnt seem to fall of.....but this was a deep track i really like the beat and i like the concept.....vocab was pretty decent in this track.....and emotion was felt very easily....work this was nice keep it up imp and ike

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thanks to all again. and i returned feed to all links that were posted.

will > I'm from Las Vegas, Nevada

Come on. Uppin this fire right here.

beat is decent


chorus could be better produced...


ur main vocals sound a tad far away...as if they lack depth or something


flow is good


a couple spots your flow was lackluster...


delivery bordered on monotonous...but wasn't bad



decent track dawg


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

and im from TN will.............uppin

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uppin this song right here.

Good collab kiddies...

I'm feeling the chorus.

Implicit:
Lyrically pretty decent throughout, flow-wise it was pretty good, a few spots where you held the last word a lil' long, makin the transition to the next statement sound immature.. not bad, presence pretty straight, feeling your emotion, and your last verse was way better, especially towards the end of the verse, you picked up..

Ike:
Your delivery and emotion is great for the track, lyrically I was feelin what you were sayin, flow-wise---- you keep gettin better and better as you keep recordin, as well as your presence, you mad confident and that's good.

Overall - I was feelin the concept of the track, the chorus was right on the head, and both of y'all held y'all own weight makin this a hot collab. I think this belong as one of the best tracks of October.

(sowwi I have to rush the feed somewhat, I'm a lil' sweepy)

But good job, and lemme know when y'all drop another track together.
9.7/10 for a collabo, just a fewwwwwwww minor mistakes...
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thanks ya for the feed. whenever you drop your new track let me know so i can leave some feed.

word..........uppin..........

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Nice colab yo! Not heard too much of either of you guys, but this came together nice. Hook is good, and quality of both ya'll is similar. Word. Implicits first verse, decent - good flow, and lyrics is good. yea - Ikes verse - good flow, laid back, same as implicit. Implicit on 3rd sounds like someone totally different haha. I dunno why. Sound higher pitched than on the first verse. Anyways - lyrics close out nice. Good track ya'll. The three of us should do something... I got a new beat I'm working on that might work good. Holla.

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^thanks for the feed

lol @ me sounding like 2 different people. get at me when you finish that beat.