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Old 11-07-05, 02:05 AM   #1
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[Verse 1:]
Cutie the bomb
Met her at a beauty salon
With a baby louis vuitton
Under her underarm
She said I can tell you ROC
I can tell by ya charm
Far as girls you got a flock
I can tell by ya charm and ya arm
but I'm lookin for the one
have you seen her
My psychic told me she have a ass like Serena
Trina, Jennifer Lopez, four kids
An I gotta take all they bad ass to show-biz
Ok get ya kids but then they got their friends
I Pulled up in the Benz, they all got up In
We all went to Den and then I had to pay
If you fuckin with this girl then you betta be payed
You know why
It take too much to touch her
From what I heard she got a baby by Busta
My best friend say she use to fuck wit Usher
I dont care what none of yall say I still love her


That is weak......


all of the bolded part is bitten form Mase....sorry

kanye is a biter
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Old 11-07-05, 02:10 AM   #2
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all of the bolded part is bitten form Mase....sorry

kanye is a biter

I used to like Ma$e
and I've heard ALOT of his songs
and I have NEVER heard Ma$e say that
get a link to some lyrics or somethin
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-06-05, 09:08 PM   #3
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the man nos speaks the truth..
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Old 11-06-05, 09:20 PM   #4
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Kanye West in Heard em say


And I heard 'em say, nothin ever promised tomorrow today.
From the Chi, like Tim its the Hard-a-way,
So this is in the name of love, like Robert says
Before you ask me to get a job today, can i atleast get a raise
on a minimum wage?
And I know the gouverment administered AIDS,
So I guess we just pray like the minister say,
Allah o Akbar and throw em some hot cars,
Things we see on the screen are not ours,
But these niggas from the hood so these dreams not far,
Where im from, the dope boys is the rock stars,
But they can't cop cars without seein' cop cars,
I guess they want us all behind bars.
I know it.

They say people in your life are seasons,
And anything that happen is for a reason,
And niggas guns a clappin and keep to squeezin',
And Gran (Grandma) keep prayin' and keep believin',
And Jesus and one day that ya see him,
Till they walk in his footsteps and try to be him,
The devil is alive I feel him breathin',
Claimin' money is the key so keep on dreamin',
And put those lottery tickets just to tease us,
My aunt Pam can't put those cigarettes down,
Now my lil cousin smokin those cigarettes now,
His job trying to claim that he too niggerish now,
Is it cuz his skin blacker than licorice now?
I can't figure it out...
Im Stickin around....


pure dopeness.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-06-05, 09:22 PM   #5
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I write better verses than both of those on a bad day.......
Sorry, but your standards of whats good are low as fuck...

But I already knew that... You know why?

Your a dipset fan..
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Old 11-06-05, 09:26 PM   #6
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I write better verses than both of those on a bad day.......
Sorry, but your standards of whats good are low as fuck...

But I already knew that... You know why?

Your a dipset fan..

ROFLMAO
Show me one of your verses, so I can show you just how WACK you really are.
lol @ you writin better than Kanye west on a bad day.
kanye writes better than your entire continent on a bad day.
plus he got the energy and nostalgia that no one you know can match
INCLUDING you.
he has superb delivery that makes his already dope lines, EVEN DOPER.
And you?
I aint heard or seen shit from you NEVER.
You're garbage, shut the fuck up, kid.
Kanye West > you.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-06-05, 09:34 PM   #7
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ROFLMAO
Show me one of your verses, so I can show you just how WACK you really are.
lol @ you writin better than Kanye west on a bad day.
kanye writes better than your entire continent on a bad day.
plus he got the energy and nostalgia that no one you know can match
INCLUDING you.
he has superb delivery that makes his already dope lines, EVEN DOPER.
And you?
I aint heard or seen shit from you NEVER.
You're garbage, shut the fuck up, kid.
Kanye West > you.

Everyones entitled to their own opinions..

But wait untill I got my tape out before you go saying dumb shit like that THANKYOU.
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Old 11-06-05, 09:46 PM   #8
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Everyones entitled to their own opinions..

But wait untill I got my tape out before you go saying dumb shit like that THANKYOU.

Im gonna assume you meant "get".

anyway, until I hear you rap, Im gonna guess that Kanye West is a million times better than you.
lyrically, AND with delivery.
you prolly rap about some shit that I dont give a fuck about.
or some shit that everybody from a innocent 2 year old girl to a 60 year old devil worshippin man cant relate to.
you suck Nos, plus I KNOW you have an accent, that just makes you worst,
I dont want to hear the crocadile hunter rapping about drugs and alcohol. - which is the only thing you make threads about.
OH, and religion.
and your theory on how human beings came to be.
ROFLMAO
you're a fuckin joke, get the fuck outta here.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Im gonna assume you meant "get".

anyway, until I hear you rap, Im gonna guess that Kanye West is a million times better than you.
lyrically, AND with delivery.
you prolly rap about some shit that I dont give a fuck about.
or some shit that everybody from a innocent 2 year old girl to a 60 year old devil worshippin man cant relate to.
you suck Nos, plus I KNOW you have an accent, that just makes you worst,
I dont want to hear the crocadile hunter rapping about drugs and alcohol. - which is the only thing you make threads about.
OH, and religion.
and your theory on how human beings came to be.
ROFLMAO
you're a fuckin joke, get the fuck outta here.

ROFL....Oh yea... 'I'm' the joke...

Look at how angry your getting yourself making up a bunch of shit about a mother fucker you dont even know..

Shit I'd hate to be dumb like you...
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Old 11-06-05, 09:25 PM   #10
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lol...Kanye needs to stop rhyming, he makes good beats sometimes...not all of them I like though...I HATE IT when people actually put him in the ranks of Talib Kweli, Mos Def, or Common...acting like just because hes associated with them he must be at the same stature...fuck that, Kanye is fucking overated as hell and I dont get why some people dont realize it...yes hes doing good shit for Hip Hop at times with Common and supporting real hip hop, but you need to face the truth that he cannot rap and the rapping part should be given to better emcees...let him produce or handle the buisness side of things.

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lol...Kanye needs to stop rhyming, he makes good beats sometimes...not all of them I like though...I HATE IT when people actually put him in the ranks of Talib Kweli, Mos Def, or Common...acting like just because hes associated with them he must be at the same stature...fuck that, Kanye is fucking overated as hell and I dont get why some people dont realize it...yes hes doing good shit for Hip Hop at times with Common and supporting real hip hop, but you need to face the truth that he cannot rap and the rapping part should be given to better emcees...let him produce or handle the buisness side of things.

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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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and you're equally retarded.

No...I just actually listen to more then 5 artists...and Kanye West prolly wont make my top 50 greatest emcees...I swear you dont know what real talent is if you think Kanye is dope as far as lyrics are concerned, you need to broaden your music archive...
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Old 11-06-05, 09:49 PM   #13
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No...I just actually listen to more then 5 artists...and Kanye West prolly wont make my top 50 greatest emcees...I swear you dont know what real talent is if you think Kanye is dope as far as lyrics are concerned, you need to broaden your music archive...

my top 5 lyricist are

not in any order..

Common
Kanye West
Joe Budden
Talib Kweli
and
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.
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young jeezy?
Hell fuckin nah
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.lil wayne?
get the fuck out of here
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Jay-z
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Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-06-05, 09:59 PM   #14
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Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
my top 5 lyricist are

not in any order..

Common
Kanye West
Joe Budden
Talib Kweli
and
.
.
.
.
.
young jeezy?
Hell fuckin nah
.
.
.
.
.
.lil wayne?
get the fuck out of here
.
.
.
.
.
.
Jay-z


I dont listen to Budden so I cant say whether hes good or not...Kweli and Common are dope, Kanye is overated...and so is Jay, Jay-Z's only respectable accomplishment in my eyes was Reasonable Doubt...everything else was wack-subpar

but LMFAO @ putting Kanye West or Jay-Z before Rakim or Canibus...Immortal Technique aint even in his prime imo and hes better then Jay-Z by a long shot...

and I would list a top 5 but I cant pick between some people so it would have to be a top 10
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Old 11-06-05, 10:06 PM   #15
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I dont listen to Budden so I cant say whether hes good or not...Kweli and Common are dope, Kanye is overated...and so is Jay, Jay-Z's only respectable accomplishment in my eyes was Reasonable Doubt...everything else was wack-subpar

but LMFAO @ putting Kanye West or Jay-Z before Rakim or Canibus...Immortal Technique aint even in his prime imo and hes better then Jay-Z by a long shot...

and I would list a top 5 but I cant pick between some people so it would have to be a top 10

how about naming people that are ACTUALLY doing something.
retard
wtf is Rakim doin now a days?
what has Canibus done this year?
have common sense, talkin about an overrated emcee, Immortal Technique is just dickrode by all you net faggots.

and you must have a mental disability if you think Resonable Doubt was the only good album by Jay-Z.
BluePrint was a damn near perfect album.
The Black Album was dope as hell, all of the life and times volumes was dope as fuck.
just stfu, before I embarrass you, really.
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