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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Poetics 0 0%
Mimesis 5 100.00%
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Old 11-15-05, 09:39 PM   #1
Blackmage
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Voted For: Mimesis

I was reading both verses and i made it through mim's and it was cool, i got to poetics and almost fell asleep. Pretty much this since i'm lazy

And who the fuck is he?.... and your sig?.... i'm past patient
Some admire the rappers.. You just look at them half naked
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U gave me the reason, I hear u screamin, prayin I wont say it, u won’t even be saved by Jesus

that line was pretty garbo but that was the best I could do
Not your best work mim

by the way RTFB
v/mimesis
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Old 11-15-05, 09:41 PM   #2
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I saw you were complaining but your losin sight of your goal. anyone can rhyme,(well not anyone) but you gotta come with a good punch or personal or something. Play on his name, use a metaphor or simile, be complex
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Old 11-16-05, 10:28 AM   #3
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Voted For: Mimesis

Pretty one sided Battle.

Mimeses had harder punches and lines that actually made sense. And kept his line about the same length so it flowed alot easier.

Poetics,your whole flow was mad forced and stretched. Just keep it short and simple,cuz when im readin it i get confused as fuck about what is supposed to rhyme where and shit. So you need some elevation.

I vot Mim. And stop picking on little people,battle me.
 
 


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