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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Poetics 0 0%
Mimesis 5 100.00%
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Old 11-15-05, 08:41 PM   #16
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I saw you were complaining but your losin sight of your goal. anyone can rhyme,(well not anyone) but you gotta come with a good punch or personal or something. Play on his name, use a metaphor or simile, be complex
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Old 11-15-05, 09:11 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by Poetics
upppppiingggg......... READ ON!!!

seriously yall..vote on QUAL-i-TAY....RAP MY RAP....
now how can u vote on a dude who uses the following as rhyming words...
fucked...suck
dude...you
patient.... naked
kickin...tickin....ok fine this last one was decent....but shit...vote on QUALITY...not just being able to end ur line with a rhyming word.....FUCK.....my rap has a whole fuckin theme - i caught him with his pants down.////ST8 UPPP


LMFAO. I didn't even see this. But man, shut the fuck up. My punches > yours. My personals > yours. My wordplay > yours. Quit whining about it.
 
Old 11-16-05, 09:28 AM   #18
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Voted For: Mimesis

Pretty one sided Battle.

Mimeses had harder punches and lines that actually made sense. And kept his line about the same length so it flowed alot easier.

Poetics,your whole flow was mad forced and stretched. Just keep it short and simple,cuz when im readin it i get confused as fuck about what is supposed to rhyme where and shit. So you need some elevation.

I vot Mim. And stop picking on little people,battle me.
 
 


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