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Old 11-27-05, 06:29 PM   #1
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word... Thx for the feed people.....I'm get at you..
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Old 11-27-05, 07:25 PM   #2
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Sound like a beat the Pre-encore Eminem would DESTROY.

You don't sound like them Canadians.

Your flow is iight in the first verse, verse was iight.

the hook was straight homo...Real talk. 'pussssy, pussyyyy' lol.


2nd verse was good...feeling that shit, cept for some parts where you ain't rhyme, but that shit was good.
3rd verse was iight...

not a stand out track really...

it's iight though.

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Old 11-27-05, 08:18 PM   #3
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You don't sound like them Canadians.


is that good or bad.. ?? anway.. thx fo the feed.. i'll hit u up wit some
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Old 11-28-05, 10:14 PM   #4
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well u really know how to choose your beat, like the intro, nice fast flow, like it, lyrics are cool, mmm i only liked the intro of the beat, your flow fell off at the end of first verse, like the gun shots, hook is eummm okay, it could be dope if it would be louder, this is your best track, dope second verse, nice opener, finaly im feelin the hook alot, third verse is iight, not my favorite, my favorite is second, overall cool track

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Old 11-29-05, 10:27 PM   #5
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word.. thx fo the feed people.. much appreciated..
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