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Voted For: Natural killa

Ok

Natural Killa

All I see is threats,when readin a one mic verse,it's clear he's a mess
'n as me dissing?,..why bother,when the oppenent considers me a vet
- Nice opener...straight to him
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001
- Ok, fairly good
Strenght you got,is none,so why use a fist to have u cracked up and sore?
Cuz all I need is one mic to beat you up and fracture ur jaw
- This did not connect really
Why bother to go anymore..cuz this dude's punches ain't felt
One Mic,One love..?..yea,cuz the one person loving u......is urself
- No

Rhyming was fine, flow was for the most part good - some decent lines there...good opener


one mic

“Fuck the crews...I run by myself”, woah! your wack, but confident
‘cause when I say you rhyme like my grandma, for you that’s a compliment
- Good first line, but didn't like the second line
Im bombin this, RV is an intellectual site, but you’re the only dumb one
“Trinidad”?? haha, this guy don’t even rep the place he come from!
- Decent personal
Claim you already won your battles, but you only winnin one, your so arrogant
Whilst my shits gold, like the star wars trilogy boxset packaging
- No....plus you shouldn't be praising yourself in the second line of a bar, especially in an 8-line battle
“You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep
- Not really workin but ok

This was a close battle, a short battle so even harder to judge who the winner is....both had a nice flow, good rhyming too....but I think Natural Killa just took this

Stay Up both

Forgot to put the link for my battle down:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...138#post2563138

Ite..thx for the vote...I'll hit ya' battle up now.

uppin.............................................

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Voted For: Natural killa

Overall:
NK...had better structure...flow..punches... opener..and personals..one mic,,,i gotta say had the best last two(closing) lines...but I gave this to NK

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NK Best Lines:
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001

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One Mic Best Lines:
You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep

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