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Old 12-06-05, 08:33 AM   #16
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you have horrible quality fa sho. your voice seems forced and fake. you sound young still, and your trying to change your voice to fit in with us North Americans so don't. the hook is weak. yourlyrics are very weak. but your elevating fast which is a good thing I guess. one thing I just don't like is your fake uk shit.

not cool.

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Old 12-06-05, 10:21 AM   #17
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Beats aight nothing to good.Flow is nice.Chorus flows good and is nice!
Lyrics are good. Emotion is there and so is your pressense

Nice Dawg.Keep It Up!

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Old 12-06-05, 12:08 PM   #18
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THx Mad

Umm...Fake Uk shit,Changin My Voice?

Thas How I Normally Sound But yeah Thx Anyway

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Old 12-06-05, 01:53 PM   #19
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Listening, pretty good beat.

goin to the beat well, good flow.

Have good lyrics appealing n shit.

Good emotion showed in this.

elevating by the second, keep it up.
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Old 12-06-05, 11:58 PM   #20
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likeing your emotion on this pissed hyped up loving it * i cant wait until you hit puberty lol *
lyrics were upped a little pretty good here
flow has gotten alot better on this track i think i heard you go off once
beat is cool what beat is it?
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Old 12-07-05, 12:25 PM   #21
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Aghhh@Ur Puberty Comment -_-

Fuck My Voice

I Look BOut 17-18 N Im 15 Its Jus My Voice Fucks Me Up
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