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Old 12-15-05, 02:10 PM   #16
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Old 12-15-05, 02:40 PM   #17
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the beat is decent
your voice sounds kind of..hollow..
ehhh, Im startin to hear the accent more than before
hmm, lol, it sounds funny hearin you talk tough, cos you dont have tough soundin voice, really
the first verse was aiigh, nothin stood out at all to me.
the hook is decent, not bad at all
3nd verse is just like the 1st. you rode the beat well, but you said nothin that stood out.
keep elevatin as usual
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Old 12-15-05, 02:49 PM   #18
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beat is hot...one day u sound UK the other u sound like a tony yayo on a drugs..lol..well lyrics are ok..flow is koo..delivery n presence good as usual presence dropped a lil tho...its cos the levels aree messed up...u dont need a new mic cos i got the mic but u need to mix better...this is kl...like the emphasise on the words...flow is kl...the hook has gotta be different from the rest of the verse....decent track..
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Old 12-15-05, 04:14 PM   #19
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LOL@tony Yayo on drugs

thx for the feed

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Old 12-15-05, 04:45 PM   #20
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its not bad
8/10 i'd say
ur last song wit intermental's ur best tho
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Old 12-15-05, 06:20 PM   #21
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ya your vocals sound tinny...flow and delivery are str8...the lyrics are coo...quality could use abit of tweek'n...i unno i like it keep it up mayne.
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Old 12-16-05, 05:17 AM   #22
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Old 12-16-05, 09:57 AM   #23
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