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Old 12-17-05, 04:11 PM   #1
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There is no worst critic then a kid. I guess she can check mine, it's the mic. *gets ready to be owned by a 13 yr old*

worrd, i thought i was too....
but if u were sexy like me maybe u'd get hit on instead
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Old 12-17-05, 04:17 PM   #2
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There is no worst critic then a kid. I guess she can check mine, it's the mic. *gets ready to be owned by a 13 yr old*

alright here ya go

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1.good lyrics i feel ya
2.flow needs too be upped
3.If you care that much put more emotion in to
4.It'd be on a christian station
5.cool
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Old 12-17-05, 04:12 PM   #3
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I don't have my pic on my SC though. lol
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Old 12-17-05, 04:14 PM   #4
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Old 12-17-05, 04:17 PM   #5
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LMFAO! Oh God dude, Joey sig that seriously.
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Old 12-17-05, 04:21 PM   #6
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LMAO!!! worrd
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Old 12-17-05, 04:14 PM   #7
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lol @ blay one. but yea, I guess it won't hurt to get critiqued. soo umm...

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run it remix. first one should play..... ain't my best but most commercial, I guess?

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Old 12-17-05, 04:19 PM   #8
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lol @ blay one. but yea, I guess it won't hurt to get critiqued. soo umm...

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run it remix. first one should play..... ain't my best but most commercial, I guess?

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alright shes listening

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1.She likes this version better then chris brown
2.You should be on the radio great song
3.Great flow
4.Good Lyrics

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alright shes listening

lmao @ tupac. but lmao tell her thanks. word....
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Old 12-17-05, 04:19 PM   #10
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get her to check out "art of war" in my soundclick in my sig

aint been mixed down/EQd/Limited/Compressed yet though so bear that in mind
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get her to check out "art of war" in my soundclick in my sig

aint been mixed down/EQd/Limited/Compressed yet though so bear that in mind

alright shes listenin too it now

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1.ok twista thats good
2.great flow
3.good lyrics
4.keep tryin too make it the radio
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I'd be bumped on a Christian station. cool
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Old 12-17-05, 04:19 PM   #13
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alright listenig now

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1.the beats cool
2.good lyrics
3.get better flow
4.keep tryin
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ROFL Blay should make that the beggining of a song.
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